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Array ( [sid] => 2782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Living Life on a Knife Edge [time] => 2002-08-26 19:20:08 [hometext] => People live their lives diffently, some have a tangle of spaghetti ahead of them, others, a million forks, and some, just straight lines, everyone can identify with one of these routes... [bodytext] => Cindy knows life is about happiness,
She kicks sand in the sun on a blazing hot day,
Weighs up every decision,
And uses the compass of joy to predict her own way.

Asha has goals set in concrete,
If it means she'll suffer, she doesn't care
She fights on with determination of steel,
No matter what pain, she knows she'll get there.

Naomi tries to weigh everything up,
Tries to catch light in the room time to time,
But spends so much time tossing and turning with thought,
Her path through life will never align.

Me, I guess it's a mixture,
Can't say I've never been in a fix,
But at the same time I set my goals,
And leave some evenings and nights to experience kicks.

Happiness must be flexible,
Don't attatch it all to one aspect of life,
Be careful when taking the left fork,
And don't place yourself on the edge of a knife.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 21 [informant] => phildel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Living Life on a Knife Edge

Contributed by phildel on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 07:20:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Cindy knows life is about happiness,
She kicks sand in the sun on a blazing hot day,
Weighs up every decision,
And uses the compass of joy to predict her own way.

Asha has goals set in concrete,
If it means she'll suffer, she doesn't care
She fights on with determination of steel,
No matter what pain, she knows she'll get there.

Naomi tries to weigh everything up,
Tries to catch light in the room time to time,
But spends so much time tossing and turning with thought,
Her path through life will never align.

Me, I guess it's a mixture,
Can't say I've never been in a fix,
But at the same time I set my goals,
And leave some evenings and nights to experience kicks.

Happiness must be flexible,
Don't attatch it all to one aspect of life,
Be careful when taking the left fork,
And don't place yourself on the edge of a knife.





Copyright © phildel ... [ 2002-08-26 19:20:08]
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Re: Living Life on a Knife Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 09:21:41 AM AEST
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I am sorry I missed this phildel..it is really good :)


Re: Living Life on a Knife Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by perfection on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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Thats really good. It actually made me think!
xoxo




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