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-But I love him - Take it back
-Can't you love him too? - As a matter of fact
I can say that YOU don't - What? No you can't

-Remember last night? - that wasn't me
-But you had fun - leave me be
-You cheated on him - Shut up! - See...
-No, it was you! - But you are me

-You made me do it - it was all you
-No I'm comitted I love him -Oh? You do?
-I do, we're getting married - true
But you cheated -you won't tell will you?

-He deserves to know - no, oh no
-He'll hate you - it wasn't me he'll know
-You're screwed, no excuses - but he'll go
But I love him! - So?

-So, isn't that enough? - for him to forgive?
-I'm sure he loves me - you cheated, no motive
-There must be a way - you have nothing to give
You're screwed he's gone - But I couldn't live

-Then you shouldn't have cheated - I didn't it was you
-he'll never believe that - then I'll hide you
-huh? me? - I can keep a secret, that's what I'll do
-But you can't! - but I have... "Oh honey, there you are... I love you..." [comments] => 4 [counter] => 285 [topic] => 7 [informant] => SeXyDrAgOn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Multiple Personalities

Contributed by SeXyDrAgOn on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 08:33:58 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

I love you - Hey! you can't say that
-But I love him - Take it back
-Can't you love him too? - As a matter of fact
I can say that YOU don't - What? No you can't

-Remember last night? - that wasn't me
-But you had fun - leave me be
-You cheated on him - Shut up! - See...
-No, it was you! - But you are me

-You made me do it - it was all you
-No I'm comitted I love him -Oh? You do?
-I do, we're getting married - true
But you cheated -you won't tell will you?

-He deserves to know - no, oh no
-He'll hate you - it wasn't me he'll know
-You're screwed, no excuses - but he'll go
But I love him! - So?

-So, isn't that enough? - for him to forgive?
-I'm sure he loves me - you cheated, no motive
-There must be a way - you have nothing to give
You're screwed he's gone - But I couldn't live

-Then you shouldn't have cheated - I didn't it was you
-he'll never believe that - then I'll hide you
-huh? me? - I can keep a secret, that's what I'll do
-But you can't! - but I have... "Oh honey, there you are... I love you..."

Copyright © SeXyDrAgOn ... [ 2002-08-26 08:33:58]
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Re: Multiple Personalities (User Rating: 1 )
by Phildel on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 09:00:01 AM AEST
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Yes I like this, It's rare to see the two sides of conscience shown like this in poetry, or even to have it used as a subject.
Nice,

Phildel

Re: Multiple Personalities (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 01:28:58 PM AEST
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This is great! I think we all have arguments with ourselves like that a lot of the time... lol. This was a great way to show it. Love this!
Ginsdance

Re: Multiple Personalities (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 03:50:45 PM AEST
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Excellent!!! Very creative, great way to express what we all go through within our own heads.

Love it! Love it! Love it!

Curtis

Re: Multiple Personalities (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 11:32:05 AM AEST
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wow that was really good i like that one alot! i agree that not many poems have both sides of the conscience. very well written....keep writing

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