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Array ( [sid] => 27781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOVING YOU [time] => 2003-11-23 23:07:12 [hometext] => old one written 9/03/1988 [bodytext] => Looking to the future, I must say
Need your love today.
Souls touch accross lonely miles
needing you all the while.
Remembering hours of loving you
slowly dieing, through and through.

Once a child bride in your arms
safe from trouble and harm.
Each time our love born anew
each child, sharing too.
Struggling to make it
through, loving you.

One day we parted friends
our dreams to end.
Traveled roads, seeking a goal,
wondering where to go.
Can't find another true
as when I loved you. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 55 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

LOVING YOU

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Looking to the future, I must say
Need your love today.
Souls touch accross lonely miles
needing you all the while.
Remembering hours of loving you
slowly dieing, through and through.

Once a child bride in your arms
safe from trouble and harm.
Each time our love born anew
each child, sharing too.
Struggling to make it
through, loving you.

One day we parted friends
our dreams to end.
Traveled roads, seeking a goal,
wondering where to go.
Can't find another true
as when I loved you.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2003-11-23 23:07:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:11:13 PM AEST
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this is lovely
michelle

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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Oh Emm.. this must have been one special love.... beautiful poem....
ugs
Jenni

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:52:26 AM AEST
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mmm.. just beautiful. venkat

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 01:52:01 AM AEST
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aww emy! this is so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:12:14 AM AEST
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so very tender..beautifully penned.
Sharon

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:34:30 AM AEST
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very well written, so lovely
Shari

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:56:30 AM AEST
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Good poem. Positive and a little sad.

On a side note it is "dying" but that doesn't take away from your poem being very good.

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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Can't find another true as when I loved you. " this line stoped me in my tracks, good thing you put it at the end instead of the begining. Soooooooo true. Another poem to enjoy while seeking inner wisdom of someone who's more than been there and done that.

Ben

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