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everyday, another piece of my soul is deadened. i can't go on like this. scarred forver. the cuttting has to stop and the depression must be controlled, but i can't. so once again the darkness consumes me. and i fall.
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teardrops

Contributed by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 09:36:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

the teardrops swell all around me, all of them are from me. i don't see the good anymore. all i see is dark. it consumes me. eating away at my soul. i want to be free. will someone help me? will that person ever come? till then i will keep trying to fight this battle. but sometimes i give up. like last wednesday. i gave up everything and tried to take away everything. but i never have the courage to do it a for sure way. so i give up to swallowing pills. but it fails and no one knows.
everyday, another piece of my soul is deadened. i can't go on like this. scarred forver. the cuttting has to stop and the depression must be controlled, but i can't. so once again the darkness consumes me. and i fall.

Copyright © saddarkgirlreingsthenight ... [ 2003-11-23 21:36:46]
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Re: teardrops (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 09:41:40 PM AEST
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this is so sad [please dont ever give up its hard I know but look for some light.
michelle

Re: teardrops (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:30:14 AM AEST
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Unusual write...not exactly a rhyming poem...but sad in many ways...your words are very painful. Take care of yourself...a lot of people on this site including me have been where you have been and I know people who went through with the suicide...very painful to be left behind too so don't put the ones who do love youthrough that, and I'm sure that you can make a difference in your life...just might take a while. All the best.

Emma.

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