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Take Me Away God

Contributed by echomywurdz on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:42:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Save me god for i have loved
Kill me now and take me above

Forgive that i have sined and cut
Just take me away before he wins,
Wins my heart a little more
Then pushes me away and calls me a whore

Afraid to show how we truely feel,
Tell me god is this real?

Save me god for i have loved
Kill me now and take my blood

Hurry please i know he'll hurt me soon
But i cant help but love this fool

Save me god for i am hurt
Help me get away from this jerk

He beat me with his enclosed fist
All because i didn't suceed his wish

Take me now for i am in pain
Take me away from this man who now seems lame

Save me god for i am dead
He took a gun and beat me in the head

I am now buried some where in the ground
Now i'm no where to be found

Maybe now you'll come for me
Save my soul, let me free




Copyright © echomywurdz ... [ 2003-11-23 13:42:38]
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Re: Take Me Away God (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:21:35 PM AEST
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I'm not sure if this is a reference to Chrisitanity or not, but that's how I interpreted it. If it is what I think it is, I agree totally.... God's the only one that can take us away from the tyrrany of Satan... you're absolutely right. Why anyone would go along with him is beyond me.... God's got the powah =)

Great write. I especially liked that last line--- save my soul, let me free. That's exactly what God does.... he frees us....

God bless ; )
Jellybellyprincess


Re: Take Me Away God (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:34:39 PM AEST
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Very good analogy of feelings.
I hope this is jus writing but jus in case u will be in my prayers as of right now!
God will lead u thru 2 freedom from the evil that trys 2 destroy. Run from him and don't look back!
peace, joy, luv, freedom,
emy


Re: Take Me Away God (User Rating: 1 )
by InteruptedFate on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:37:58 PM AEST
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damn, you got issues... but its a VERY VERY good write. i loved it. ive read all your poems, and if you ever need someone to talk to, im right here. you seem like someone id like. kir.

the one and only. tiffanie.




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