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Array ( [sid] => 27723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My sorrow [time] => 2003-11-23 06:09:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have just learned sorrow.
One of three things
That I hoped never to learn
Sorrow, anger and hate
Are these things
Watching other make my mistakes
Brought to my knees with tears in my eyes
A young man was all it took
To hear his story to feel this
Had no choice nor a way out
Can’t care right now just wanting to die again
Holding myself is all that I have right now
Crying quietly to not disturb


The book of the faulty phoenix
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
My sorrow

Contributed by Cobalt on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:09:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I have just learned sorrow.
One of three things
That I hoped never to learn
Sorrow, anger and hate
Are these things
Watching other make my mistakes
Brought to my knees with tears in my eyes
A young man was all it took
To hear his story to feel this
Had no choice nor a way out
Can’t care right now just wanting to die again
Holding myself is all that I have right now
Crying quietly to not disturb


The book of the faulty phoenix




Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-11-23 06:09:46]
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Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:55:53 AM AEST
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nice one my friend....


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:57:35 AM AEST
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So few words but yet so much said.This is very emotional,personal and I feel the pull of sorrow here.
Hold tight,light of day will come again.You are strong.I believe this!
Another excellent write!
Sharon


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 07:53:27 AM AEST
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Sorrow is an emotion that is needed to keep us open hearted to others in need, then inturn they will be there for us!!!

Nice write!!!
#13


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 12:52:15 PM AEST
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Dear Cobalt,
Your focus on this one was very intent!
My heart was hurting and then it was bent!
Cobalt, this was so personal I could tell.
Will you all right, and will he be as well?
Sadness, misery, hurtfuly delight! One line stood out for me. "Holding myself" I'd never thought of that before....of course we have to hold ourselves when there's no one there bu you!
Wonderful Cobalt!
ConSue


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:23:16 PM AEST
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Heartfelt and touching... hang tuff, Jeff...you have been doing so well... stay strong, my friend... PM me if you want to talk...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:13:33 PM AEST
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beautiful in its honesty....


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:20:19 PM AEST
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knock knock........here is a hug.....sandy


Re: My sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:35:31 AM AEST
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WOW! Beautiful write! Awesome imagery!

ES




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