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Array ( [sid] => 2769 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Promised [time] => 2002-08-26 06:47:03 [hometext] => I promised her I'd wait for her... [bodytext] => You left me behind, I promised I'd be here waiting
But you moved on, you were physically with someone else
I sat here, alone, not knowing what to feel or what to do
Unexperianced in life, you promised you'd be the one to show me
You promised you wouldn't let it happen again, but you did
I let it go because I love you and I always will
Even if you feel differently
You left me behind, I kept my promises to you
You came to find me, and I was around
But you didn't know me
You didn't know what you had done to me
You didn't know what I had become
You didn't know that not even you could fix me
No one but me can save me, but it's too late now
I have no desire to heal myself to hurt again
I hate myself and you should too
Because I wasn't good enough for you
What am I to do?
I am nothing anymore
Thanks to you....
But I still love you
And I always will
You wanted me to be strong for you
So I am
It takes a strong person to end their own life
Is that strong enough for you?
Because I will
But, I still love you
I mean that, too
I always will... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Demise [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
I Promised

Contributed by Demise on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 06:47:03 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



You left me behind, I promised I'd be here waiting
But you moved on, you were physically with someone else
I sat here, alone, not knowing what to feel or what to do
Unexperianced in life, you promised you'd be the one to show me
You promised you wouldn't let it happen again, but you did
I let it go because I love you and I always will
Even if you feel differently
You left me behind, I kept my promises to you
You came to find me, and I was around
But you didn't know me
You didn't know what you had done to me
You didn't know what I had become
You didn't know that not even you could fix me
No one but me can save me, but it's too late now
I have no desire to heal myself to hurt again
I hate myself and you should too
Because I wasn't good enough for you
What am I to do?
I am nothing anymore
Thanks to you....
But I still love you
And I always will
You wanted me to be strong for you
So I am
It takes a strong person to end their own life
Is that strong enough for you?
Because I will
But, I still love you
I mean that, too
I always will...




Copyright © Demise ... [ 2002-08-26 06:47:03]
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Re: I Promised (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 06:44:22 AM AEST
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so much emotion in this poem
a great write


Re: I Promised (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:44:23 PM AEST
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who is this poem about aaron jeffery? it is about me?..... i know you'll figure out who i am......




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