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Clean and Pure
Contributed by
mckayla
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Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:01:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hey its me.
Well it's been almost a year and all's the same.
I can't believe I made it this far and without you here.
What I miss most is the stuff that didn't matter,
oooh how I loved thee where are you now?
It must be nice to be happy somewhere else.
Crazy minds;
though not yours how you wish it was, but mine.
Learning roads are easy, the paths are more difficult.
I wonder what path I'll take.
Hopefully it will lead to your door.
When it opens;
your soul that wasn't there before.
Appears clean and pure
Copyright ©
mckayla
... [
2003-11-22 14:01:51]
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:30:53 PM AEST
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| I like the way you only brought in a rhyme at the end of the poem, it took me a few reads to notice why it had such an impact on me, I enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Clean and Pure
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:44:04 AM AEST
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great write
peace and joy
JENNA |
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