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Argument
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:18:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It cuts me cold,
cuts me to the core,
a bitter wound,
an open sore,
a shalllow plea
I do deplore,
to lift this sorrow,
nevermore.
Some stinging words,
with thoughtless meaning,
I look for a sign
of wisdom gleaning
from you tired eyes
and feathered preening,
but your heartless actions
have sent my reeling.
You cut me down
and left to roam,
there's no help for me,
no sacred tome,
you left this house,
left our home,
because you don't love me,
I'm all alone.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2003-11-22 10:18:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Argument
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:33:11 AM AEST (User
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Very good work!
I know the feeling but he didn't leave me I made him leave as he can't appreciate a good thing.
hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Argument
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:40:01 AM AEST (User
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Ouch, you're obviously hurting a lot. Hope you're doing alright....a great piece, this. |
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Re: Argument
(User Rating: 1 ) by mckayla on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:51:55 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful write!
mckayla |
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