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Array ( [sid] => 27590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give away [time] => 2003-11-21 12:41:14 [hometext] => i wrote this 2 years ago when i was ready to leave a jerk [bodytext] => Today is the day I give you away

I look at you and only see
wretched decay

You ripped me apart and
broke my fragile heart

All the threats and lies
got caught up

I cannot be stuck
with such pain
a specal place for you
willl always remain
I can no longer take the blam
for something I didn't do
this isn't me it's you

Today is the day I give you away
You made our love decay

JENNA [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 21 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Give away

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:41:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Today is the day I give you away

I look at you and only see
wretched decay

You ripped me apart and
broke my fragile heart

All the threats and lies
got caught up

I cannot be stuck
with such pain
a specal place for you
willl always remain
I can no longer take the blam
for something I didn't do
this isn't me it's you

Today is the day I give you away
You made our love decay

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-21 12:41:14]
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Re: Give away (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:10:07 PM AEST
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good poem, i hope to read more from you

Re: Give away (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 02:48:19 PM AEST
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I can fully understand where you are comming from this one. I liked the write. Conveyed the emotions perfectly for me.

Re: Give away (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:19:15 AM AEST
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Purgatori

Funny the last poem I wrote I called "Give Away"
Yours though is quite different in content.
Your anger and frustration came through strong--very expresive.
I am glad this was a poem of a long while ago.

Your friend
Sinned

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