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Array ( [sid] => 27557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Redemption [time] => 2003-11-21 00:09:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => darkness falls
wings torn, showered in pain
the needle calls
tears a hole into his vein
blackness flows
from the hole into his heart
there he goes
he knows the dreams about to start
hes walking now
with God divine throughout the glen
but then somehow
shadows laugh and follow him
God looks away
and that is when they grab ahold
he tries to pray
they drag him down to their abold
he comes awake
screams aloud into the night
he cannot take
this demon that he has to fight
hes all alone
in this fight he cannot win
no ones home
no one there to comfort him
the walls they scream
six six six six six six
hes gone insane
he grabs ahold of crucifix
he kneels in prayer
darkness slowly turns to light
God is there
the demons run into the night
now he strolls
with God almighty through the glen
the devil knows
he'll never drag him down again [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 11 [informant] => doug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Redemption

Contributed by doug on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

darkness falls
wings torn, showered in pain
the needle calls
tears a hole into his vein
blackness flows
from the hole into his heart
there he goes
he knows the dreams about to start
hes walking now
with God divine throughout the glen
but then somehow
shadows laugh and follow him
God looks away
and that is when they grab ahold
he tries to pray
they drag him down to their abold
he comes awake
screams aloud into the night
he cannot take
this demon that he has to fight
hes all alone
in this fight he cannot win
no ones home
no one there to comfort him
the walls they scream
six six six six six six
hes gone insane
he grabs ahold of crucifix
he kneels in prayer
darkness slowly turns to light
God is there
the demons run into the night
now he strolls
with God almighty through the glen
the devil knows
he'll never drag him down again

Copyright © doug ... [ 2003-11-21 00:09:51]
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Re: Redemption (User Rating: 1 )
by loveiswonder on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:01:11 AM AEST
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i loved it! Thanks for putting that on here to let others see what God can do for them

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