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Array ( [sid] => 27504 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Symphony of Clouds [time] => 2003-11-20 06:15:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Thunder causes lights to flicker
Almost left in the dark
Immense beams of barbed lightning strike
At this distance no more than a spark

Rain pounds the rattling windows
As my heart pounds my chest
This musical masterpiece of nature
Leaves me delirious and obsessed

I stand soaked in the downpour
Sheets of rain coming from every way
I stand and feel it's my time
This is where I want ot stay

Nature what have you brought
This time you have surely sinned
As strands of hair blow across my face
I long to be swept away in the wind

The cascade of water rinses my wounds
The puddles at my feet are red as wine
The garnet pool rises to my waist
Pain washes over, this release is mine

I stand 'neath blackened clouds
A crying child shivering and cold
The drops of rain have become my tears
The storm is my story untold [comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Vitreous_Soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Symphony of Clouds

Contributed by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:15:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Thunder causes lights to flicker
Almost left in the dark
Immense beams of barbed lightning strike
At this distance no more than a spark

Rain pounds the rattling windows
As my heart pounds my chest
This musical masterpiece of nature
Leaves me delirious and obsessed

I stand soaked in the downpour
Sheets of rain coming from every way
I stand and feel it's my time
This is where I want ot stay

Nature what have you brought
This time you have surely sinned
As strands of hair blow across my face
I long to be swept away in the wind

The cascade of water rinses my wounds
The puddles at my feet are red as wine
The garnet pool rises to my waist
Pain washes over, this release is mine

I stand 'neath blackened clouds
A crying child shivering and cold
The drops of rain have become my tears
The storm is my story untold

Copyright © Vitreous_Soul ... [ 2003-11-20 06:15:39]
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Re: Symphony of Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:36:22 AM AEST
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Quote - "Immense beams of barbed lightning strike" - wow good imagy throughout this write. I truly loved this. Thanks for sharing.

Emma.

Re: Symphony of Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by Eve on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 03:37:38 PM AEST
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This is my favourite yet. Words can't describe how good this is; I can't even come up with a word. But these words are combined beautifully. A wonderful, wonderful write.

-Eve

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