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Array ( [sid] => 27467 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Knight and The Maiden [time] => 2003-11-19 19:05:46 [hometext] => another two/language one / další dvoujazyčná.. [bodytext] => In apparel woven of strands of the night
standing maiden
on the edge of the abyss

In the moonshine, her apparel
snow-white, shining and gently waving
maybe soft breeze - or stars movement
was playing with her long hair

Pack of wolves sitting behind her
she has no fear, she´s their mistress
queen of the woods, or witch?

So far, in the darkness
something glistens
dark knight on wild horse
slowing down, drawing near

She knew he had to come
he let her know
envoy of devil
does not mean the curse
to abandon

The wolves howled
and the fear covered the land
but the maiden resigned, was waiting
for what comes

The dark knight jumped down his horse
came to her
even the wolves fell silent of fear
and maiden looking at him

Evil suffocating her, knees shivering
heart pounding
with proud standing still
the maiden, with love radiating

He looked at her
drew his sword
wanted to kill her
for that she never abandoned, but...

He fell on his knees
threw away the sword
deeply touched with her pure love
he jumped down to the abyss
his evil he damned

Darkness and fear dispersed
the sun raised, even the wolves disappeared
the maiden turned her sight
on the white knight
who was just coming to her

Centuries of curse
power of love
long tight hugs
the knight and the maiden, coming back, home...

V měsíčním svitu, její šat
jemně se vlní a bělostně září
snad větřík - pohyb hvězd možná
pohrával si s jejími dlouhými vlasy

Smečka vlků sedí za ní
nebojí se, je jejich paní
královna lesů, čarodějka?

V dáli, v temnotě
cosi se zablýskne
temný rytíř na divokém koni
zapomaluje, blíží se k ní..

Věděla, že přijde,
on dal jí o tom znát,
posel ďáblův
nehodlá svou kletbu vzdát

Vlci zavyli
a krajinu pokryl strach
jen panna odevzdaně čekala
co přijde pak

Temný rytíř seskočil z koně
a přišel až k ní
i vlci strachy utichli
a panna dívá se naň

Zlo ji dusilo, třásla se kolena,
srdce splašeně bušilo
ale hrdě dál stála,
ta panna, láskou zářící

On pohleděl na ni
tasil svůj meč
hodlal ji zabít
neb nevzdala se, leč..

Padl na kolena,
meč odhodil
zasažen čistou láskou panny
zlo své proklel,
do propasti skočil

Tma i strach se rozplynul
slunce vyšlo, i vlci zmizeli
panna obrátila svůj zrak
na bílého rytíře,
který právě přijížděl

Staletí kletby,
síla lásky,
dlouhá, těsná objetí
rytíř s pannou domů se vrací....




[comments] => 5 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 49 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )
The Knight and The Maiden

Contributed by Aika on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 07:05:46 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical



In apparel woven of strands of the night
standing maiden
on the edge of the abyss

In the moonshine, her apparel
snow-white, shining and gently waving
maybe soft breeze - or stars movement
was playing with her long hair

Pack of wolves sitting behind her
she has no fear, she´s their mistress
queen of the woods, or witch?

So far, in the darkness
something glistens
dark knight on wild horse
slowing down, drawing near

She knew he had to come
he let her know
envoy of devil
does not mean the curse
to abandon

The wolves howled
and the fear covered the land
but the maiden resigned, was waiting
for what comes

The dark knight jumped down his horse
came to her
even the wolves fell silent of fear
and maiden looking at him

Evil suffocating her, knees shivering
heart pounding
with proud standing still
the maiden, with love radiating

He looked at her
drew his sword
wanted to kill her
for that she never abandoned, but...

He fell on his knees
threw away the sword
deeply touched with her pure love
he jumped down to the abyss
his evil he damned

Darkness and fear dispersed
the sun raised, even the wolves disappeared
the maiden turned her sight
on the white knight
who was just coming to her

Centuries of curse
power of love
long tight hugs
the knight and the maiden, coming back, home...

V měsíčním svitu, její šat
jemně se vlní a bělostně září
snad větřík - pohyb hvězd možná
pohrával si s jejími dlouhými vlasy

Smečka vlků sedí za ní
nebojí se, je jejich paní
královna lesů, čarodějka?

V dáli, v temnotě
cosi se zablýskne
temný rytíř na divokém koni
zapomaluje, blíží se k ní..

Věděla, že přijde,
on dal jí o tom znát,
posel ďáblův
nehodlá svou kletbu vzdát

Vlci zavyli
a krajinu pokryl strach
jen panna odevzdaně čekala
co přijde pak

Temný rytíř seskočil z koně
a přišel až k ní
i vlci strachy utichli
a panna dívá se naň

Zlo ji dusilo, třásla se kolena,
srdce splašeně bušilo
ale hrdě dál stála,
ta panna, láskou zářící

On pohleděl na ni
tasil svůj meč
hodlal ji zabít
neb nevzdala se, leč..

Padl na kolena,
meč odhodil
zasažen čistou láskou panny
zlo své proklel,
do propasti skočil

Tma i strach se rozplynul
slunce vyšlo, i vlci zmizeli
panna obrátila svůj zrak
na bílého rytíře,
který právě přijížděl

Staletí kletby,
síla lásky,
dlouhá, těsná objetí
rytíř s pannou domů se vrací....








Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-11-19 19:05:46]
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Re: The Knight and The Maiden (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 07:55:20 PM AEST
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beautiful.....feels like a past life.......


Re: The Knight and The Maiden (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 09:01:48 PM AEST
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very beautiful , i loved this poem , walk in peace and happiness your friend doug


Re: The Knight and The Maiden (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 09:59:56 PM AEST
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this is beautiful... what is the other language you used?? looks pretty.


Re: The Knight and The Maiden (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:22:53 PM AEST
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Wonderful aika........truly an inspiration.
Your words simply float across the page.
xx


Re: The Knight and The Maiden (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 11:51:25 AM AEST
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How very beautiful Aika, you have a way of carrying me to "Romantic Places" from which I do no want to return! This was simply wonderful Aika....I'm so glad to see you back. We all missed you!
Love you too!
conSue




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