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Array ( [sid] => 27411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She was supposedly yours... as was I [time] => 2003-11-18 18:20:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pushed out of your way
as you found another amusing
Never thought I'd see this day
Where you I'd be losing

You talked to her but a single time
And decided she was more than I
Decided you just wouldn't be mine
All we had you would simply deny

So unlike you this was
Didn't think I'd see this
Simply leaving because
I was easy to dismiss

Another swept me away
Saving me from falling
Though I still regretted that day
And you yourself I found appalling

With the friend I did stay
He knows I don't love him
But it was kept this way
Simply friends neatly trimmed

The one you found amusing
Found something better to do
You got a taste of your own abusing
For she found one better than you

You were left alone
Crying in your despair
To this I'd known you were prone
Couldn't have been changed by a prayer

You decide to get smart
Come tell me you love me
Proud of yourself you are
you think from your problems your freed

But forget it my dear
I don't play games this way
Once you were out of here
That was where you were to stay

Should have thought about it
Before you left my life
You won't have me, you selfish twit
You've put me through enough pain and strife.
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She was supposedly yours... as was I

Contributed by katzie on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 06:20:41 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Pushed out of your way
as you found another amusing
Never thought I'd see this day
Where you I'd be losing

You talked to her but a single time
And decided she was more than I
Decided you just wouldn't be mine
All we had you would simply deny

So unlike you this was
Didn't think I'd see this
Simply leaving because
I was easy to dismiss

Another swept me away
Saving me from falling
Though I still regretted that day
And you yourself I found appalling

With the friend I did stay
He knows I don't love him
But it was kept this way
Simply friends neatly trimmed

The one you found amusing
Found something better to do
You got a taste of your own abusing
For she found one better than you

You were left alone
Crying in your despair
To this I'd known you were prone
Couldn't have been changed by a prayer

You decide to get smart
Come tell me you love me
Proud of yourself you are
you think from your problems your freed

But forget it my dear
I don't play games this way
Once you were out of here
That was where you were to stay

Should have thought about it
Before you left my life
You won't have me, you selfish twit
You've put me through enough pain and strife.

Copyright © katzie ... [ 2003-11-18 18:20:41]
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Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:41:51 PM AEST
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Great job, a beautiful poem. I liked this a lot, especially the "the one you found amusing / found something better to do / you got a taste of your own abusing / for she found one better than you". And good for you--I know that must've been hard, what you did.

Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:43:26 PM AEST
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Angry poetry without screaming or profanity--- now THAT's tasteful poetry. This my friend is tasteful angry poetry. Very well done, I'm impressed.... Kudos =)

~Jelly

Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I (User Rating: 1 )
by BlueStar on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 03:39:26 PM AEST
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This is a great poem! I loved it.... keep up the good work.

Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I (User Rating: 1 )
by 6_2 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:07:44 AM AEST
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There is obviously alot of emotion put into this poem. I thought it was very good, thanks for sharing it with others

Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 07:35:18 PM AEST
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Brought back vivid memories of my younger life, Disturbing uncomfortably excellent write.

bob

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