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Seeking shelter from the storm
Each one battling their own inner demons
With time and trust, they will transform

Gentle lips whisper sweet promises
Their touch as soft as a sigh
Meaningful looks aimed straight at the heart
On each other, they come to rely

Patiently accepting, providing encouragement
Welcoming arms await
Precious, tender, emotional bonds
Is what they've begun to create

Eyes alight, burning with hope
The future is theirs to attain
Turning away from the past, faces towards the sun
Experiencing emotions neither can explain

Hearts exposed, each feeling fragile and scared
They both have lessons to learn and to teach
Giving over and following their hearts
Towards each other, they continue to reach.

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Souls Entwined

Contributed by Tanna on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:51:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Two bruised souls entwined
Seeking shelter from the storm
Each one battling their own inner demons
With time and trust, they will transform

Gentle lips whisper sweet promises
Their touch as soft as a sigh
Meaningful looks aimed straight at the heart
On each other, they come to rely

Patiently accepting, providing encouragement
Welcoming arms await
Precious, tender, emotional bonds
Is what they've begun to create

Eyes alight, burning with hope
The future is theirs to attain
Turning away from the past, faces towards the sun
Experiencing emotions neither can explain

Hearts exposed, each feeling fragile and scared
They both have lessons to learn and to teach
Giving over and following their hearts
Towards each other, they continue to reach.

Copyright © Tanna ... [ 2003-11-17 12:51:11]
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Re: Souls Entwined (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:05:08 PM AEST
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Ya know...I really liked this. I loved the feel of it, the style.

Very well done :o)

Larry

Re: Souls Entwined (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:13:33 PM AEST
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Id really love to read what happens when they eventually reach each other :)

Great read.....

Cheers
#13

Re: Souls Entwined (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:21:11 PM AEST
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Tanna, this is beautiful, very calm and cooling, really reaches in take care, always Val

Re: Souls Entwined (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:46:06 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem.. Tanna this is very lovely. venkat

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