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The blade slicing each picture in two
Tears well at the corners of my eyes
Good memories are far and few

Thrown without care in the back of a drawer
Keepsakes of days I'll never relive
Emotions kept forever as simple mementos
All I have left in this world to give

From my heart and through my wrists
Onto your hands
Flows my sentiment

As I depart my words insist
Of my hatred
You're the embodiment

Desperately seeking what I need most
Do I deserve it or am I insane
It's getting darker every night
The lights are off at memory lane

Amity a vague concept
Drowning in a pool of falsehood
As I reminisce over my tangible memories
Wasting away and hoping for something good

From my heart and through my wrists
Onto your hands
Flows my sentiment

As I depart my words insist
Of my hatred
You're the embodiment

Flipping through the pages of my life story
Unwritten the last chapter remains
Wanting to be the picture in the locket
Loved or not I'll die the same [comments] => 6 [counter] => 503 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Vitreous_Soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 31 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Sentimental

Contributed by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:21:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Flipping through the photo album
The blade slicing each picture in two
Tears well at the corners of my eyes
Good memories are far and few

Thrown without care in the back of a drawer
Keepsakes of days I'll never relive
Emotions kept forever as simple mementos
All I have left in this world to give

From my heart and through my wrists
Onto your hands
Flows my sentiment

As I depart my words insist
Of my hatred
You're the embodiment

Desperately seeking what I need most
Do I deserve it or am I insane
It's getting darker every night
The lights are off at memory lane

Amity a vague concept
Drowning in a pool of falsehood
As I reminisce over my tangible memories
Wasting away and hoping for something good

From my heart and through my wrists
Onto your hands
Flows my sentiment

As I depart my words insist
Of my hatred
You're the embodiment

Flipping through the pages of my life story
Unwritten the last chapter remains
Wanting to be the picture in the locket
Loved or not I'll die the same

Copyright © Vitreous_Soul ... [ 2003-11-17 06:21:34]
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Re: Sentimental (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:53:35 AM AEST
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So sad and painful....awesome poem!

Re: Sentimental (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:03:31 PM AEST
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You definately have a talent for bringing the reader into the poem, and experiencing the emotions first hand.
Excellent write.
~T

Re: Sentimental (User Rating: 1 )
by zaowhvn on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 02:31:19 PM AEST
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oh my god thats awesome. mirrored feelings of my own. this is the best

Re: Sentimental (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:52:07 AM AEST
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Well, color me impressed. If not one of your best, then certainly up there. I can almost hear the music it's sung to . . . .

Adored the imagery. These vivid pictures will be running around my head for quite some time, I expect.

Beautiful.

--Nora

Re: Sentimental (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 04:53:04 PM AEST
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This one just breaks my heart. So filled with sadness but it calls to me. The ending regarding the locket was the clincher. I think i'll read it yet again. Kie

Re: Sentimental (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:09:47 PM AEST
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I can definately sympathize, espeacially today.

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