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Array ( [sid] => 27278 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oh, just stop it! [time] => 2003-11-17 00:09:57 [hometext] => This is for those who intentionally try to hurt people. Ecspecially when that person does not deserve it. [bodytext] => Look here my dear,
come on over sit near.
Much to say and tell
'cause you know I've
been through all hell.
Please don't confuse
these stars in my eyes.
They aren't for you.
You know what all
of them do say.
I need to speak
and hope you comprehend.
My heart is not yours
and you haven't held
that still beating
thing for so long.
I've found myself dear.
So please stop trying
to hurt me I can't feel it
and you're just wastin' time.
Just get over yourself
'cause no ones that great.
I'm happy now theres no debate.

The book of the faulty phoenix [comments] => 8 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Oh, just stop it!

Contributed by Cobalt on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Look here my dear,
come on over sit near.
Much to say and tell
'cause you know I've
been through all hell.
Please don't confuse
these stars in my eyes.
They aren't for you.
You know what all
of them do say.
I need to speak
and hope you comprehend.
My heart is not yours
and you haven't held
that still beating
thing for so long.
I've found myself dear.
So please stop trying
to hurt me I can't feel it
and you're just wastin' time.
Just get over yourself
'cause no ones that great.
I'm happy now theres no debate.

The book of the faulty phoenix

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-11-17 00:09:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:38:33 AM AEST
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Now if only they read this and know who they are. Good write.

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:42:43 AM AEST
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Hi cobalt,
u get ten thumbs up for this one!
luv it! u go now, u got it going on!
Great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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u write from an odd point of view there Jeff but its good nonetheless remember to give me some proceeds from yer book hehe.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 04:26:47 AM AEST
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Dear Jeff,
This poem is really good for learning....once you can pick them out.....then for them there is no yearning. This was an excellent poem indeed. Reading people so we don't get hurt is definitely a great need.
There are those that so sick they be....they'd rather make you unhappy, no matter what the fee. "misery loves company" the saying goes...and all my life....I've checked that out...
they are all around and all about. I really enjoyed this one, Jeff....because you are on to them now....they can't reach you once you know they are foul!
Wonderful Poem.
Warm Poetic Love,
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 03:34:47 PM AEST
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Hi Jeff
good advice in a well written verse.
i try to be careful with my heart these days
it's been trampled on lately - lol

merry

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 05:44:05 PM AEST
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nice write Jeff... :)

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:28:39 PM AEST
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Great write!! Hopefully they will stop!!

mckayla

Re: Oh, just stop it! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:26:59 AM AEST
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Great message here...liked this a lot...
Jenni

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