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Array ( [sid] => 27272 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Change Did Us No Good [time] => 2003-11-16 22:29:31 [hometext] => Change doesn't do some people good. [bodytext] => I remember now why it is,
That you were my very best friend.
You knew me like no one knew me,
It’s too bad that came to an end.

You grew up, I grew up
Why can’t things stay the same?
I accused you of our dwindling bond,
But you’re not the one to blame.

I can on put the blame on myself,
You did absolutely nothing wrong.
If anything, you tried to work things out;
If only our love was lifelong.

I’m such a fool for ruining things.
Just think about what we could be.
Instead I’m here, feeling guilty,
And living my life in misery.

I miss the way you cheered me up,
The way I knew that you did care.
I miss our long, momentous conversations
I miss just having you there.

I remember now why it is,
I want you forever in my life.
Can we please forget all the horrible times?
And pretend that I made no strife? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Schnikes13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Change Did Us No Good

Contributed by Schnikes13 on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:29:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I remember now why it is,
That you were my very best friend.
You knew me like no one knew me,
It’s too bad that came to an end.

You grew up, I grew up
Why can’t things stay the same?
I accused you of our dwindling bond,
But you’re not the one to blame.

I can on put the blame on myself,
You did absolutely nothing wrong.
If anything, you tried to work things out;
If only our love was lifelong.

I’m such a fool for ruining things.
Just think about what we could be.
Instead I’m here, feeling guilty,
And living my life in misery.

I miss the way you cheered me up,
The way I knew that you did care.
I miss our long, momentous conversations
I miss just having you there.

I remember now why it is,
I want you forever in my life.
Can we please forget all the horrible times?
And pretend that I made no strife?

Copyright Â© Schnikes13 ... [ 2003-11-16 22:29:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Change Did Us No Good (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:04:09 PM AEST
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hope you get your friend back and if not youve got a new one, me your friend doug

Re: Change Did Us No Good (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 04:36:36 AM AEST
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Just loved this poem. Read it twice already. Once you realize the problem and that you were to blame....takes away the pain, and the shame...I hope your friend understands, and will take you back....being humble is not somethig you lack!
Great JoB!
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Change Did Us No Good (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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This was pretty good. No one is ever the only one to blame... Usually. I have a suggestion though. Make ammends as best you can with that person. Don't make the mistake of having to regret later on in life.
Love and hope,
Jeff

Re: Change Did Us No Good (User Rating: 1 )
by harshreality on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:25:01 PM AEST
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great poem. anything is possible but you have to pursue it. love always finds a reason to forgive. best of luck

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