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Array ( [sid] => 27251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tuneless Tune [time] => 2003-11-16 18:02:39 [hometext] => I was once told that some can hear angels sing... [bodytext] => She's singing a tuneless tune,
In what she thinks is an empty room.
It's echoing off of the walls,
Echoing back to you.
She wants to be alone,
But you don't know know what to do.
You just can't seem to stop listening to,
The haunting sound of that tune.
You decide to linger there,
You're careful not to cough,
You know she'll leave the room,
If she finds out you're there.
You want to see who she is,
And take a glance inside;
But that angel's disappeared,
She's gone off to hide.
She's afraid of you,
And afraid of what you'll do.
She won't take any chances,
But she'll keep singing that tuneless tune. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 49 [informant] => Eve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Tuneless Tune

Contributed by Eve on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:02:39 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

She's singing a tuneless tune,
In what she thinks is an empty room.
It's echoing off of the walls,
Echoing back to you.
She wants to be alone,
But you don't know know what to do.
You just can't seem to stop listening to,
The haunting sound of that tune.
You decide to linger there,
You're careful not to cough,
You know she'll leave the room,
If she finds out you're there.
You want to see who she is,
And take a glance inside;
But that angel's disappeared,
She's gone off to hide.
She's afraid of you,
And afraid of what you'll do.
She won't take any chances,
But she'll keep singing that tuneless tune.

Copyright © Eve ... [ 2003-11-16 18:02:39]
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Re: Tuneless Tune (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:16:16 PM AEST
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WOW!! That's the coolest poem I've ever read!! Keep writing.

Re: Tuneless Tune (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:17:38 PM AEST
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Keen perspective. Now I know I've read this poem before, in a wistful jaunt through your neck of these woods.

I part based a successful poem of mine on this title (but not the content), and I didn't realise where it had come from, until now.

I like the way you constructed thsi, from an old adage, into the trepidous state that one fears when one is confronted with wonder . . . very wistful. I like wistful.
4 stars, Eve.

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