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Array ( [sid] => 27186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Little Hate [time] => 2003-11-15 22:19:40 [hometext] => This is not a happy family poem. I kinda rambled. Please comment! God. I am truely scared even writing about this man, yet he has never laid a finger on me. [bodytext] =>
People look at me and say how sweet.
A girl with her hair in two braids.
Each one as thick as most peoples whole hair.
A simple skirt.
Elegant folds of emerald velvet.
Splayed across a chair.
Crocheting in maroon splayed across it.
White and maroon, emerald and a deep dark brown.
My body splays as well.
Unless I don't like you.
My shoulders hunch.
My eyes grow wide and fearful.
I crochet quickly and silently.
When you leave, I laugh with joy.
They say I'm so sweet.
I am in some ways.
You have never met a sweeter girl.
Even though I lie and cheat.
When I love you, you are safe.
You are safe or I will make you safe.
My love is easily gotten if you have the right eyes.
Eyes I feel comfortable staring into.
Then there is You.
I don't like you.
You scare me more than I have ever been frightend before.
Your laughing eyes have shadows.
You are a terrifying man.
You are unlike the others in our family.
You are tall and blonde and I hate you.
I always have.
I feel sick in your presence.
You are a cloud over humanity.
One the world cannot see.
But I can.
I am the only ***** one.
Oh, the power you have over me.
I am terrified thinking of you.

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Sweet Little Hate

Contributed by sindi-selde on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

People look at me and say how sweet.
A girl with her hair in two braids.
Each one as thick as most peoples whole hair.
A simple skirt.
Elegant folds of emerald velvet.
Splayed across a chair.
Crocheting in maroon splayed across it.
White and maroon, emerald and a deep dark brown.
My body splays as well.
Unless I don't like you.
My shoulders hunch.
My eyes grow wide and fearful.
I crochet quickly and silently.
When you leave, I laugh with joy.
They say I'm so sweet.
I am in some ways.
You have never met a sweeter girl.
Even though I lie and cheat.
When I love you, you are safe.
You are safe or I will make you safe.
My love is easily gotten if you have the right eyes.
Eyes I feel comfortable staring into.
Then there is You.
I don't like you.
You scare me more than I have ever been frightend before.
Your laughing eyes have shadows.
You are a terrifying man.
You are unlike the others in our family.
You are tall and blonde and I hate you.
I always have.
I feel sick in your presence.
You are a cloud over humanity.
One the world cannot see.
But I can.
I am the only ***** one.
Oh, the power you have over me.
I am terrified thinking of you.

You.

Copyright © sindi-selde ... [ 2003-11-15 22:19:40]
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Re: Sweet Little Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:24:47 PM AEST
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I love it. Of course. Makes me shudder to read it . . . this sounds stupid, but who are you thinking of? Is it . . . the person we mentioned who frequently calls . . . her father? I'm not sure I want to know . . .

Re: Sweet Little Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:32:00 PM AEST
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BTW, I rated it a five. :-)

--Shadow

Re: Sweet Little Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 01:21:47 AM AEST
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You use words that a lot don't use and that is interesting...and this write I feel has a disturbing feel to it...which some do experience. All the best.

Emma.

Re: Sweet Little Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:36:34 PM AEST
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i hope that you never have to see this man again. live in peace and happiness your friend doug

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