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[aid] => mick
[title] => thats the way you hide
[time] => 2003-11-15 21:37:43
[hometext] => this is about a very abusive person who used ot be in my life...
[bodytext] => The way you sit and stare at me form across the room makes me feel like an animal caged up.. the way you make me shrink down when you rise up...thats the way you hide
You yell at me and belittle me in a sense as to where ill never get back on my feet again...the way you say my name and make it a cusre for anyone to say... thats the way you hide
I remember the day you hit me for the first time..I felt you glowing in my pain.. basking in the little blood that i had shed...i felt it all and knew you loved it.. thats the way you hide
Any mortal soul could feel the hate...you could never love.. after so long your just now learning that there are new ways to torture but i understand..thats the way you hide
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thats the way you hide
Contributed by
angel_facing_judgement
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 09:37:43 PM in AEST
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The way you sit and stare at me form across the room makes me feel like an animal caged up.. the way you make me shrink down when you rise up...thats the way you hide
You yell at me and belittle me in a sense as to where ill never get back on my feet again...the way you say my name and make it a cusre for anyone to say... thats the way you hide
I remember the day you hit me for the first time..I felt you glowing in my pain.. basking in the little blood that i had shed...i felt it all and knew you loved it.. thats the way you hide
Any mortal soul could feel the hate...you could never love.. after so long your just now learning that there are new ways to torture but i understand..thats the way you hide
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Re: thats the way you hide
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by sindi-selde on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:22:04 PM AEST
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I cannot tell you I can understand. I can't.
My friend went through this. I want to castrate the bastard that did that to a four year old.
Anyways, I am really sorry. Sounds lame, but that's all I can say.
I like the style of your words. |
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Re: thats the way you hide
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:32:30 PM AEST
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I have been abused...by words and physically. Words can hurt just as much as physical abuse. They stay with you and you can conceal them just like bruises and cuts but they never go away like the physical wounds. Although physical wounds can scar...but yeah your words many people do go through this. I hope that everything is okay for you now that they are out of your life. Good write thank you for sharing it.
Emma. |
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Re: thats the way you hide
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by sniffels on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 12:15:36 AM AEST
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angel i have been there. i have been abused by several people. it hurts so much but soon,in time, you will heal. in time they will gte what is coming to them. STAY STRONG GIRL!!!
kathy |
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Re: thats the way you hide
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:35:12 PM AEST
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| its hard to understand why people do the things they do and I can tell this still haunts you I'm sorry for what you went through. I watched it happen to my mom my entire childhood. |
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Re: thats the way you hide
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:31:05 AM AEST
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I will probably be yelled at for this. I liked the write but I will say this anyways. As this was my situation... IF you where lying and cheating then you where doing just the same. If you situation was different then it was unjustified. I don't believe you should hurt anyone anymore though. Unless you are protecting someone else. If anyone would like to yell at me go for it. You can even e-mail me and yell at me just go to my profile. I liked the write though.
Love and hope,
Jeff |
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Re: thats the way you hide
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:10:46 PM AEST
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| i have been here........ |
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