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Array ( [sid] => 27182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain Me Not [time] => 2003-11-15 19:58:27 [hometext] => I was inspired to write this poem after hearing the lies my ex-girlfriend was spreading... [bodytext] => I wish I could breath you in
See your face
Feel your skin

We use to be so close
So bonded
So inseperable

But you hurt me
Abused me
Lied to me

I wished you were different
Changed
Pure

Now you've done it

What happened to that time
You loved me
Respected me

You hate me
Despise me
Curse me

My friends all know
Lies you've told
Hearts you've broke

Grow up!
Find yourself
Pain me not [comments] => 4 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 22 [informant] => RealmX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Pain Me Not

Contributed by RealmX on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 07:58:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I wish I could breath you in
See your face
Feel your skin

We use to be so close
So bonded
So inseperable

But you hurt me
Abused me
Lied to me

I wished you were different
Changed
Pure

Now you've done it

What happened to that time
You loved me
Respected me

You hate me
Despise me
Curse me

My friends all know
Lies you've told
Hearts you've broke

Grow up!
Find yourself
Pain me not

Copyright © RealmX ... [ 2003-11-15 19:58:27]
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Re: Pain Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 08:05:58 PM AEST
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beauty of relationships huh? pffft.... i hate them. my ex is being a total cow now... and the girl that i was seeing is ignoring me because i thought she was going too fast (i won't say...) we just have to put things behind us... its hard, but soon everything will be ok. this is a good piece.... and thanks for sharing it.

Re: Pain Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by Rissa on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 09:20:44 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this. My last boyfriend started spreading rumors about me after he ended the relationship. And when I confronted him about it, his only justification was that he was spreading crap about me because he "assumed I was talking about him behind his back too".

Re: Pain Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by zaowhvn on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:05:24 PM AEST
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relatable.
written as if taken right out of my head

Re: Pain Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:18:33 AM AEST
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I apolagize for them all lol. Not that that means much. I liked this. I forgive anyways it matters not what they say but who you are inspite of them.

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