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My Trouble
Contributed by
RealmX
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:20:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Give me a hand, get me outta this hole
I don't wanna completely lose control
Staggering and stumbling across the vast
Fate seems to have left me surpassed
Don't leave me here, alone with my thoughts,
A venture overlooked by the Argonauts!
Do you think I can survive alone in this world
With my sanity still left to be unfurled?
No one will come, no one will aid...
My mind will slowly put up its mental barricade
Leave me be, solely with my trouble
Copyright ©
RealmX
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2003-11-15 14:20:19]
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Re: My Trouble
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by zaowhvn on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:27:13 PM AEST
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| great work. relateable. doesnt writing this help alot? it does for me |
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Re: My Trouble
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:47:45 PM AEST
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I like this poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: My Trouble
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:18:45 PM AEST
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Is it that you need someone to help you but you also don't want anyone to help you...or you just can't reach out to anyone? If so I can definately relate. I hope that this trouble that you write about here has passed and you have grown and learned from it...a good write and hope that writing it did help even if just a bit.
Emma. |
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