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Array ( [sid] => 27145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Surrender [time] => 2003-11-15 06:17:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Release your hand from your lower face
And exhale today forgetting about tomorrow

Weakness will be strengthened from this battle
But first you must surrender
Yourself to your past
And simplify your complications

Hit me
I know you fold
What happened to your poker face?

What's to gain by your selfishness?
You swallow your feelings
Like a kid with his pees

It's time you look at what you've lost by remaining the same
And how pushing back realization brings the Past closer

Your hope rises in those dreams
You never sleep to see
And your betrayal of trust has tilted me toward Righteousness
Lifting my spirit once again

Forever knowing
Nothing will ever become of us
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Surrender

Contributed by zaowhvn on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 06:17:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Release your hand from your lower face
And exhale today forgetting about tomorrow

Weakness will be strengthened from this battle
But first you must surrender
Yourself to your past
And simplify your complications

Hit me
I know you fold
What happened to your poker face?

What's to gain by your selfishness?
You swallow your feelings
Like a kid with his pees

It's time you look at what you've lost by remaining the same
And how pushing back realization brings the Past closer

Your hope rises in those dreams
You never sleep to see
And your betrayal of trust has tilted me toward Righteousness
Lifting my spirit once again

Forever knowing
Nothing will ever become of us

Copyright © zaowhvn ... [ 2003-11-15 06:17:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 06:35:27 AM AEST
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Damn. Love it!!! You are about as twisted as I am.

Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:28:27 AM AEST
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Wow, this is an awesome work of art, I must say..... Welcome to the site..... Yeah, this is some great writing. I love the poker reference. Hope you have brighter days =)

God bless,
Ellen

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