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[aid] => mick
[title] => No love
[time] => 2003-11-15 01:01:42
[hometext] => This is about love..... AND HOW IT DOESN'T EXIST!!! wee....
[bodytext] => weaving back and forth from my pleasure to my pain. My mind deceives me into thinking that there is something to gain. But in this world of lust and sin, everyone wants whats best for them. Combined with one but heed another, You just can't restrain your desires for others. It eats at you like a plague from within, till it seethes and it oozes and bursts from your skin. So stay for a season and leave me to rot, but you'll find out that this boy you want cares for you not. I used to need your comfort and solace, but now I can see it's utterly worthless. You'll give it to people that just don't care, to predators and hunters of shadowed nightmares. I could have been your angel of shining embrace, but now I can hardly stand to see your face. I'm sickened by your countenance as you realize what you've done. You've thrown me from my place of glory in the blazing sun. Now I rest in darkness, biding all my time. I can never trust you again, or any of your kind. You're all the same regardless of name and now I know this in my mind. I will not be deceived again, by your hollow needs. Instead i'll just remind you of what you did to me. I'll only live to hurt you and avenge my fallen faith, cause now I know what you are and i've become a wraith. I'll pray on your emotions, until you think its real. Then take it all away from you and hope you never heal. This is a burden of hatred, and forever it will last. Until every single one of you has drunk from my glass.
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[informant] => Demon_of_blood
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No love
Contributed by
Demon_of_blood
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:01:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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weaving back and forth from my pleasure to my pain. My mind deceives me into thinking that there is something to gain. But in this world of lust and sin, everyone wants whats best for them. Combined with one but heed another, You just can't restrain your desires for others. It eats at you like a plague from within, till it seethes and it oozes and bursts from your skin. So stay for a season and leave me to rot, but you'll find out that this boy you want cares for you not. I used to need your comfort and solace, but now I can see it's utterly worthless. You'll give it to people that just don't care, to predators and hunters of shadowed nightmares. I could have been your angel of shining embrace, but now I can hardly stand to see your face. I'm sickened by your countenance as you realize what you've done. You've thrown me from my place of glory in the blazing sun. Now I rest in darkness, biding all my time. I can never trust you again, or any of your kind. You're all the same regardless of name and now I know this in my mind. I will not be deceived again, by your hollow needs. Instead i'll just remind you of what you did to me. I'll only live to hurt you and avenge my fallen faith, cause now I know what you are and i've become a wraith. I'll pray on your emotions, until you think its real. Then take it all away from you and hope you never heal. This is a burden of hatred, and forever it will last. Until every single one of you has drunk from my glass.
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Re: No love
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST
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| I liked this but try to forgive. People change. I could have fully related to you earlier in the year. I can't anymore and one day I hope you can learn to forgive her/him and yourself. |
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Re: No love
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:45:26 AM AEST
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| I love the way you express your feelings. Just remember to have faith in people. I've felt exactly the way you do at different times in my life and I've learned that revenge isn't always sweet. Exspecially if it robs you of the chance to meet someone who truly cares. |
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Re: No love
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:38:31 PM AEST
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| Ah, the "Stefon's Theory of *****". Great write; the theme carries itself well. |
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Re: No love
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 09:53:01 AM AEST
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hmmm interesting....
-Love LuCy |
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