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Array ( [sid] => 2705 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Father [time] => 2002-08-24 10:53:24 [hometext] => This was written about my Father who killed himself when I was 5 [bodytext] => Don't tell me the truth, I already know
I read your death certificate last night.
How could you do it, did you see the light
Why couldn't you just look through my innocent eyes?
My heart has been ripped apart, my life is not the same, So why don't I just take away the pain?
One more tablet, one more slice of evil
Come on do your job, kill me now if you will?
I can feel it taking my body, its working, I'm dying, thanks for a great life (not) but I must ask why?
Why so much hurt? why so much pain? I never want to go through that again
But wait.. I'm still alive, how could this be? They're all leaning over me waiting to see me
Why didn't I die? Why am I still here? They're must be a reason why they want to keep me here
To be an insperation
To be here for others
To save another precious life
And to keep me here with my Mother [comments] => 1 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Jezzabell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Father

Contributed by Jezzabell on Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 10:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Don't tell me the truth, I already know
I read your death certificate last night.
How could you do it, did you see the light
Why couldn't you just look through my innocent eyes?
My heart has been ripped apart, my life is not the same, So why don't I just take away the pain?
One more tablet, one more slice of evil
Come on do your job, kill me now if you will?
I can feel it taking my body, its working, I'm dying, thanks for a great life (not) but I must ask why?
Why so much hurt? why so much pain? I never want to go through that again
But wait.. I'm still alive, how could this be? They're all leaning over me waiting to see me
Why didn't I die? Why am I still here? They're must be a reason why they want to keep me here
To be an insperation
To be here for others
To save another precious life
And to keep me here with my Mother

Copyright © Jezzabell ... [ 2002-08-24 10:53:24]
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Re: Father (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 11:18:24 AM AEST
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I can feel your pain and I`m also asking myself why?
Thanks for sharing

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