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Array ( [sid] => 27036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => walk together in eternity [time] => 2003-11-13 21:02:15 [hometext] => My first 'love' poem ever......feel free to be honest!!! [bodytext] => From today until eternity
I give you all I am
Please tell me you can see
I will give with my hand
Everything I will ever be

Please take it, don’t let go
Give me all that you are
We will take it slow
Don’t ever wander too far
In love there is never too low

And if we get too far away
Can’t find the way home
Just in love stay
Know you aren’t alone
love finds a way

From today until eternity
There is no you or I.... just we
We can’t give up or let go
We have to take it a little slow
And even when their seems no way
It is then that we will have to stay
Love is never doubting, but too see
The walk together in eternity
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walk together in eternity

Contributed by irshprnss on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:02:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



From today until eternity
I give you all I am
Please tell me you can see
I will give with my hand
Everything I will ever be

Please take it, don’t let go
Give me all that you are
We will take it slow
Don’t ever wander too far
In love there is never too low

And if we get too far away
Can’t find the way home
Just in love stay
Know you aren’t alone
love finds a way

From today until eternity
There is no you or I.... just we
We can’t give up or let go
We have to take it a little slow
And even when their seems no way
It is then that we will have to stay
Love is never doubting, but too see
The walk together in eternity




Copyright © irshprnss ... [ 2003-11-13 21:02:15]
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Re: walk together in eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST
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beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: walk together in eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 10:24:44 PM AEST
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its good for a first love poem . i like it . keep em comin


Re: walk together in eternity (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 10:47:18 PM AEST
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Reads like a dream and a beatiful dream it is




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