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Array ( [sid] => 27030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unjustified Crime [time] => 2003-11-13 18:08:49 [hometext] => Wrote this Halloween night...please comment...my others too! --thanks! [bodytext] => I rip my hair out,
At every frustration,
This moment is killing me,
My energy it's erasin'.
I am tired of the blame,
Being put on me,
And I am tired of the pointing finger,
Just let me be!
They let him get away,
With what he wants,
He is always congradulated,
For lies and fronts.
They know he's a sinner,
But call him a winner,
Just because he has a chemical imbalance,
They always allow him.
The word 'unfair',
Doesn't justify the situation,
Forever my hair will be pulled out,
In utter frustration.
I am tired of trying,
To understand,
Of this constant headache,
It's more than I am.
It's never going to change,
Probably till the day I die,
Forever I'll be destroying myself,
With angry tears in my eyes.
All I have left,
Is this horrible thing called time,
Nothing to protect me,
From this unjustified crime.

Heather Marie Hutchins [comments] => 4 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 48 [informant] => HedderMarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Unjustified Crime

Contributed by HedderMarie on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 06:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I rip my hair out,
At every frustration,
This moment is killing me,
My energy it's erasin'.
I am tired of the blame,
Being put on me,
And I am tired of the pointing finger,
Just let me be!
They let him get away,
With what he wants,
He is always congradulated,
For lies and fronts.
They know he's a sinner,
But call him a winner,
Just because he has a chemical imbalance,
They always allow him.
The word 'unfair',
Doesn't justify the situation,
Forever my hair will be pulled out,
In utter frustration.
I am tired of trying,
To understand,
Of this constant headache,
It's more than I am.
It's never going to change,
Probably till the day I die,
Forever I'll be destroying myself,
With angry tears in my eyes.
All I have left,
Is this horrible thing called time,
Nothing to protect me,
From this unjustified crime.

Heather Marie Hutchins

Copyright © HedderMarie ... [ 2003-11-13 18:08:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unjustified Crime (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 06:26:31 PM AEST
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good poem heather, i hope things get better for you

Re: Unjustified Crime (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 08:37:47 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I too hope things are better for u now.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Unjustified Crime (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 10:07:59 PM AEST
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Keep Writing
its a beautiful sound

Re: Unjustified Crime (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 01:59:33 AM AEST
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this is a sad write but a good one

Peace

JENNA

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