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Array ( [sid] => 27008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pain I Feel [time] => 2003-11-13 08:18:00 [hometext] => The title is pretty much self-explanitory, but I wrote this a year or 2 ago when my depression was bad. [bodytext] => I'm tired of living this lifestyle
practically poor with few friends
even my family is totally screwed up
please tell me when all this ends
I'm told that I should tell
how I feel inside
but no matter how hard I try
I can't help but hide
I hide my true feelings
from the ones who should be there
but even if I opened up
nobody would really care
I can't take this much longer
my anger makes me want to explode
but when the depression comes
I feel as though my head and heart will implode
when I get so upset
that it brings me to tears
I always seem to realize
one of my greatest fears
that someone will see me
and I'll have to explain
what's really going on
inside my screwed up brain
I put up with more
than most people do
and then I get walked on
but that's nothing new
I put all my feelings
and some of my rage
into the words that you read
from every single page
and I pray that the reader
will feel every word
and that's when I know
that my pain has been heard [comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 21 [informant] => TracyAnn489 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Pain I Feel

Contributed by TracyAnn489 on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 08:18:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I'm tired of living this lifestyle
practically poor with few friends
even my family is totally screwed up
please tell me when all this ends
I'm told that I should tell
how I feel inside
but no matter how hard I try
I can't help but hide
I hide my true feelings
from the ones who should be there
but even if I opened up
nobody would really care
I can't take this much longer
my anger makes me want to explode
but when the depression comes
I feel as though my head and heart will implode
when I get so upset
that it brings me to tears
I always seem to realize
one of my greatest fears
that someone will see me
and I'll have to explain
what's really going on
inside my screwed up brain
I put up with more
than most people do
and then I get walked on
but that's nothing new
I put all my feelings
and some of my rage
into the words that you read
from every single page
and I pray that the reader
will feel every word
and that's when I know
that my pain has been heard




Copyright © TracyAnn489 ... [ 2003-11-13 08:18:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Pain I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Puffer on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:22:26 AM AEST
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I like this poem alot, I can relate to alot of things said. Keep up the good writing!


Re: The Pain I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:04:16 PM AEST
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very straightforward I enjoyed this mucho. I hope you found your way out of the depression.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: The Pain I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 12:56:57 AM AEST
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very sad write but a good one

great job

peace and joy

JENNA




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