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Array ( [sid] => 27000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2003-11-13 04:22:58 [hometext] => ......i dont think im ever letting myself fall in love again [bodytext] => most games are fun,
but some can be cruel,
like the one you played on me,
made me feel like a fool.

should never have trusted you.
should have believed what i was told.
you may have acted the part,
but your heart was not made of gold.

i was tricked.
made to believe that you cared.
the truth was found out,
after i gave in to you and shared.

can't get back what i lost.
should have thought about it more.
you told an untrustworthy friend,
now i have the rep of a whore.

i really loved you,
i thought you felt it too. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 43 [informant] => eeka_taquito [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

untitled

Contributed by eeka_taquito on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:22:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

most games are fun,
but some can be cruel,
like the one you played on me,
made me feel like a fool.

should never have trusted you.
should have believed what i was told.
you may have acted the part,
but your heart was not made of gold.

i was tricked.
made to believe that you cared.
the truth was found out,
after i gave in to you and shared.

can't get back what i lost.
should have thought about it more.
you told an untrustworthy friend,
now i have the rep of a whore.

i really loved you,
i thought you felt it too.

Copyright © eeka_taquito ... [ 2003-11-13 04:22:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:48:33 AM AEST
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So much pain and torment in your words. Loss of hope. You really expressed your emotions well. I just really hope that you do not lose faith in love. Peace be with you. Excellent poem!

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:55:01 AM AEST
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Hey honey,
I know the feeling.
this is great writing as it will surly help someone to think before.
Don't be so hard on yourself, my friend.
We all get took a t times.
When you're getting degrated he's making a fool of himself!
Hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 03:26:01 PM AEST
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I can relate to this and I know where yer at, but realize that soon the pain will stop and you will be able to forget. By the way before I forget its good to see more stuff from ya.

Bobo (Joel)

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