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Array ( [sid] => 26965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How? [time] => 2003-11-12 19:14:19 [hometext] => Wow i felt better after writing this down! All my anger and sadness running through my fingers, flooding out into this poem. This is my first non rhyming poem. Plz leave feedback. [bodytext] => How? How could you do this to me?
Replace me with another so soon,
After we’ve been through so much,
You just threw it all away, so easily
Do you think you can play me for a fool?
As if I didn’t know you were together
So fast you turned to another,
Is she so better than me?
You find her more attractive; I’m only smart,
You met with her secretly, but I knew of it,
She’s the new person to say, “I miss you” to
I’m the person you now ignore,
Our conversations are short,
You have better things to do,
True, I have others liking me,
Caring for me more than you did,
But I can’t be with them,
For you stole my heart,
I want it back!
I can never be with you again,
You’ve changed into this evil entity
That has a hold over my soul,
Get out of my life, my mind, my dreams!
You replaced me so quickly
How could you do it?
You knew how it hurt me,
Do you not care? After caring so long?
Everything we did, meant nothing?
Or do you just try to forget?
You adore her, like you once adored me
You treated her how you first treated me,
You tell me she’s found another
Am I to believe this after the other lies?
And after seeing you two together
You make it secret, but secretly flaunt it,
How can you be this cruel?
I did nothing to you
I didn’t think you’d ever get sick of me,
I didn’t think you’d move on straight after,
Just one kiss you had with her,
When you were still with me,
Brought you two together,
Did you not once think about me?
The week before, we were together,
The week after, you were with her,
Without thinking about the consequences,
That would affect my heart and feelings,
There is another that cares for me,
More than you ever did,
But why can I not feel for him?
The way you can so quickly feel for her,
Because I still love you,
And also hate you,
Two strong feelings, intertwined,
Now I feel nothing, but emptiness,
You took it all, every last bit,
Now I cannot share it with another,
How are you able to do this?
You once told me you loved me,
Now you tell me that was a lie
So much lies, so much deceit,
I did nothing to deserve this,
Are you just pure evil?
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How?

Contributed by nomie on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:14:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



How? How could you do this to me?
Replace me with another so soon,
After we’ve been through so much,
You just threw it all away, so easily
Do you think you can play me for a fool?
As if I didn’t know you were together
So fast you turned to another,
Is she so better than me?
You find her more attractive; I’m only smart,
You met with her secretly, but I knew of it,
She’s the new person to say, “I miss you” to
I’m the person you now ignore,
Our conversations are short,
You have better things to do,
True, I have others liking me,
Caring for me more than you did,
But I can’t be with them,
For you stole my heart,
I want it back!
I can never be with you again,
You’ve changed into this evil entity
That has a hold over my soul,
Get out of my life, my mind, my dreams!
You replaced me so quickly
How could you do it?
You knew how it hurt me,
Do you not care? After caring so long?
Everything we did, meant nothing?
Or do you just try to forget?
You adore her, like you once adored me
You treated her how you first treated me,
You tell me she’s found another
Am I to believe this after the other lies?
And after seeing you two together
You make it secret, but secretly flaunt it,
How can you be this cruel?
I did nothing to you
I didn’t think you’d ever get sick of me,
I didn’t think you’d move on straight after,
Just one kiss you had with her,
When you were still with me,
Brought you two together,
Did you not once think about me?
The week before, we were together,
The week after, you were with her,
Without thinking about the consequences,
That would affect my heart and feelings,
There is another that cares for me,
More than you ever did,
But why can I not feel for him?
The way you can so quickly feel for her,
Because I still love you,
And also hate you,
Two strong feelings, intertwined,
Now I feel nothing, but emptiness,
You took it all, every last bit,
Now I cannot share it with another,
How are you able to do this?
You once told me you loved me,
Now you tell me that was a lie
So much lies, so much deceit,
I did nothing to deserve this,
Are you just pure evil?




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Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:21:17 PM AEST
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hope you get your heart back and find someone better


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:41:29 PM AEST
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dearest nomie, great expression, this one was not your true love; for he is also looking for you:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 10:06:35 PM AEST
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Sad write, but so well written.. Great show of emotions... hope you feel better soon
Jenni


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 10:10:51 PM AEST
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Very expressive....Are you sure you didn't write this about my life? lol You'll survive it and come out of this stronger and smarter than you were. Just remember that you deserve better!




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