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Array ( [sid] => 26922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => circle of friends [time] => 2003-11-12 04:43:25 [hometext] => iv ditched these friends now thank god [bodytext] => i am trapped in this circle of deseat and betrayle
one where you constantly watch your back
because you never know who's behind you ready with a knife
and if thiers a person in their with a gun
they are like a wild dog
they shoot anyone
so im always carfull not to get in the way of my "friends"
i have a secret that i cannot ever tell
though living with the guilt of its trully helll
but if i trust somone
when the circle turns the other way
my trust will be thrown away
and my stupidy used against me
so i shut my mouth
i wish i could sleep
i never dream
i always keep one i open
watching the eye thats watching me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 16 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

circle of friends

Contributed by loopylou on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:43:25 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

i am trapped in this circle of deseat and betrayle
one where you constantly watch your back
because you never know who's behind you ready with a knife
and if thiers a person in their with a gun
they are like a wild dog
they shoot anyone
so im always carfull not to get in the way of my "friends"
i have a secret that i cannot ever tell
though living with the guilt of its trully helll
but if i trust somone
when the circle turns the other way
my trust will be thrown away
and my stupidy used against me
so i shut my mouth
i wish i could sleep
i never dream
i always keep one i open
watching the eye thats watching me

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-12 04:43:25]
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Re: circle of friends (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:58:14 AM AEST
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seen your two poems..there is some point in your writings..infact true friends who are very rare.But any way try to be positive since all are not bad. venkat

Re: circle of friends (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:56:16 AM AEST
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A chilling reality written into this poem...
Good write....

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Re: circle of friends (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 05:27:52 PM AEST
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Nice write BUT your poem could do with a spell check.

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