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Array ( [sid] => 26899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => VENUS AND MARS [time] => 2003-11-11 21:46:37 [hometext] => Two stubborn people can be so alike and so different at the same time... In the end it's all good and we just realize we are like Venus and Mars. [bodytext] => Your eyes so sad do implore
Not knowing my thoughts to explore
You don’t understand me
You try to command me
To end it and just shut the door

My voice you don’t want to hear
I go on and on in your ear
I don’t always follow
I try not to wallow
In hopes we’ll end in good cheer

Our time too precious to waste
When silence follows distaste
We don’t mean to do it
We just muddle through it
Wishing smiles to swap a stone-face

Eventually the difference is parted
Whatever it is that we started
It’s just Venus and Mars
Not drugs and bars
So trivial I’m sorry to have caused it

~ Robbie ~
11/11/03
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VENUS AND MARS

Contributed by robbieb on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:46:37 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Your eyes so sad do implore
Not knowing my thoughts to explore
You don’t understand me
You try to command me
To end it and just shut the door

My voice you don’t want to hear
I go on and on in your ear
I don’t always follow
I try not to wallow
In hopes we’ll end in good cheer

Our time too precious to waste
When silence follows distaste
We don’t mean to do it
We just muddle through it
Wishing smiles to swap a stone-face

Eventually the difference is parted
Whatever it is that we started
It’s just Venus and Mars
Not drugs and bars
So trivial I’m sorry to have caused it

~ Robbie ~
11/11/03

Copyright Â© robbieb ... [ 2003-11-11 21:46:37]
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Re: VENUS AND MARS (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:02:35 PM AEST
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very good i like the way it flows along

Re: VENUS AND MARS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:26:44 PM AEST
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Loved your rhyme scheme.. very nice write.
Jenni

Re: VENUS AND MARS (User Rating: 1 )
by Peg on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 07:38:23 PM AEST
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Hi babygirl, as usual you get right to the heart of things and ended it on a positive note.
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