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I know I made you a promise and I am ashamed to say that I broke it
When you find out and I know you will
Please don’t get mad at me for that just makes me to want to do it more

I had to punish myself for I had failed
Please try to understand
I didn’t mean to cause you all this pain
That is why I am hiding it from you

You mean the world to me
But since our trip I am unsure if you feel the same
What I thought would bring us closer
In fact tore us apart

If you chose to leave me
Please remember the good times
Forget the fights and the times of anger
Can you do that for me? Please that’s the last thing I beg of you

I love you and will miss you
But I guess if it ends it wasn’t meant to be
I will miss our talks and your hugs
But this might be for best

I love you dear brother
But if you want me to let go I will
For I love you to much to hurt you any more
I love you and good bye?

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GoodBye my brother?

Contributed by lil_angel on Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 08:38:57 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I just couldn’t handle it anymore
I know I made you a promise and I am ashamed to say that I broke it
When you find out and I know you will
Please don’t get mad at me for that just makes me to want to do it more

I had to punish myself for I had failed
Please try to understand
I didn’t mean to cause you all this pain
That is why I am hiding it from you

You mean the world to me
But since our trip I am unsure if you feel the same
What I thought would bring us closer
In fact tore us apart

If you chose to leave me
Please remember the good times
Forget the fights and the times of anger
Can you do that for me? Please that’s the last thing I beg of you

I love you and will miss you
But I guess if it ends it wasn’t meant to be
I will miss our talks and your hugs
But this might be for best

I love you dear brother
But if you want me to let go I will
For I love you to much to hurt you any more
I love you and good bye?

Copyright Â© lil_angel ... [ 2002-08-24 08:38:57]
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Re: GoodBye my brother? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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I lost my brother for 15 years because of family strife...thanks to God, we are brothers again after all this time. Dont give the fight my friend. Time is the healer of all wounds Great, emotional write. Larry

Re: GoodBye my brother? (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:33:40 PM AEST
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This is really good. Although it reminds me of my brother, my mom and dad are going to chase him away ,actionally I think they already did. I don't think he'll come back. Nicely written by the way keep up the work.

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