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Array ( [sid] => 26862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Leaving You Behind [time] => 2003-11-11 06:27:18 [hometext] => I'm so sorry.... [bodytext] => Life has dealt me,
A very bad hand,
I really want to leave,
This heart breaking land.

To stop this hurt,
I would have to die,
No-one could know,
I would have to lie.

One more week,
Till my life ends,
When I take that last pill,
Death it will send.

Nothing can stop me,
It’s my time to leave,
The hurt you will know,
And why I had to deceive.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cammy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Leaving You Behind

Contributed by cammy on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 06:27:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Life has dealt me,
A very bad hand,
I really want to leave,
This heart breaking land.

To stop this hurt,
I would have to die,
No-one could know,
I would have to lie.

One more week,
Till my life ends,
When I take that last pill,
Death it will send.

Nothing can stop me,
It’s my time to leave,
The hurt you will know,
And why I had to deceive.

Copyright Â© cammy ... [ 2003-11-11 06:27:18]
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Re: Leaving You Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 06:41:36 AM AEST
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very good write.....it's like i feel what your feeling

~Brittany~

Re: Leaving You Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:26:37 AM AEST
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I like this poem but I hope it is not a cry for help.If you take that last pill we won't be deceived,we here will all know! And life is to precious to just give up,as we all have been dealt a raw deal,but perservering and overcoming is what makes us stronger.If you want to PM me...feel free...my door is always open!!!!! 0:-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni {{{cammy}}}

Re: Leaving You Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 05:55:27 AM AEST
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yes, im going to repeat what joni did, and that you can PM me any time.. I have felt like this sooo many times.. I can relate..
This is a good poem by the way. I think poetry is an excellent way to scream out pain, isn't it?
charlotte x_x_x

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