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Array ( [sid] => 2683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Voices [time] => 2002-08-24 08:33:21 [hometext] => This is tough for me to write about but it helps to talk about it. [bodytext] => They were so quiet for so many months i thought they had left.
They came rushing back like a wild bush fire
Fat, ugly, dont eat, cut,
All swarming in my head
They attack me when i least except it
bringing me to tears

I told you i could fight this battle on my own
but cant you see i cant? I just didnt want to burden you
I am the older sibling i am suppose to be the strong one
your fat, your worthless, no one will ever love you
i dont know how to get rid of them
they arent leaving this time

They tell me if i tell anyone they will harm others
they tell me that its all my fault
They tell me so many things
dont you see i have to listin to them
I dont know what to do

please help me so i can continue
i dont know what to do
or where to turn
Tell me that i am pretty, that i am loved

over power the vocies speak over them
when the attack me hold me dont ignore them
for they are real as real can be

I dont want to force this on you
but this is how you can help me

For they will only be quiet for a season
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lil_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Voices

Contributed by lil_angel on Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 08:33:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



They were so quiet for so many months i thought they had left.
They came rushing back like a wild bush fire
Fat, ugly, dont eat, cut,
All swarming in my head
They attack me when i least except it
bringing me to tears

I told you i could fight this battle on my own
but cant you see i cant? I just didnt want to burden you
I am the older sibling i am suppose to be the strong one
your fat, your worthless, no one will ever love you
i dont know how to get rid of them
they arent leaving this time

They tell me if i tell anyone they will harm others
they tell me that its all my fault
They tell me so many things
dont you see i have to listin to them
I dont know what to do

please help me so i can continue
i dont know what to do
or where to turn
Tell me that i am pretty, that i am loved

over power the vocies speak over them
when the attack me hold me dont ignore them
for they are real as real can be

I dont want to force this on you
but this is how you can help me

For they will only be quiet for a season




Copyright © lil_angel ... [ 2002-08-24 08:33:21]
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Re: Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:57:15 AM AEST
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writing about your feeling does help..if you must scream ...scream
take care
by the way a fine write


Re: Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:41:41 PM AEST
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you are very talented writer. especially at conveying emotion and your point across.




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