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Array ( [sid] => 26815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TIMELESS LOVE [time] => 2003-11-10 09:23:54 [hometext] => He was suppose to have said, I snuffed you out, because I loved you too much! [bodytext] => She walks with beaming beauty's light!
Projecting Moon Beams from her hair at night!
Her radiant illumination, encourages
sexual, sensual sensation!
He meets her as the sun disappears.
Fearless, tender embraces for years.
Ravenous hunger to join....
Like one they match their loin.

She senses his "vibs" are strange?
Breathing deeply to rearrange.
His anger flares, her heart declares,
"You are smothering me with your love!"
A pillow grabbed, and securely held, by
the weight of his body.....
her light is snuffed, like a wee dove!

Insane tears trickle down his cheek.
His rational mind appearing very weak,
but awakens his soul, as he screams,
"Oh, My God, what have I done?"
Quickly he takes her in his arms.
Kisses of fire, kissing alarms.
"Please, my darling," he pleads,
"Come back to me!"
"I need your light, I need it so badly!"

He feels her slipping movement,
a small sliver of light.....
Another tender kiss above her breast
to coach her heart aright!
She opens her eyes and snuggles
within his warm arms grip.
The darkness has passed,
For one special moment,
she understands,
this had to take place.......
As her heart beats and then skips...
'Twas a lunar Eclipse!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
Moon eclipse
Nov. 8, 2003 [comments] => 4 [counter] => 456 [topic] => 51 [informant] => lovingcritters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
TIMELESS LOVE

Contributed by lovingcritters on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 09:23:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Event



She walks with beaming beauty's light!
Projecting Moon Beams from her hair at night!
Her radiant illumination, encourages
sexual, sensual sensation!
He meets her as the sun disappears.
Fearless, tender embraces for years.
Ravenous hunger to join....
Like one they match their loin.

She senses his "vibs" are strange?
Breathing deeply to rearrange.
His anger flares, her heart declares,
"You are smothering me with your love!"
A pillow grabbed, and securely held, by
the weight of his body.....
her light is snuffed, like a wee dove!

Insane tears trickle down his cheek.
His rational mind appearing very weak,
but awakens his soul, as he screams,
"Oh, My God, what have I done?"
Quickly he takes her in his arms.
Kisses of fire, kissing alarms.
"Please, my darling," he pleads,
"Come back to me!"
"I need your light, I need it so badly!"

He feels her slipping movement,
a small sliver of light.....
Another tender kiss above her breast
to coach her heart aright!
She opens her eyes and snuggles
within his warm arms grip.
The darkness has passed,
For one special moment,
she understands,
this had to take place.......
As her heart beats and then skips...
'Twas a lunar Eclipse!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
Moon eclipse
Nov. 8, 2003




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Re: TIMELESS LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 03:03:44 PM AEST
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BRAVO!! BRAVO!!


Re: TIMELESS LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 03:46:33 PM AEST
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Great write! Love how you ended it ... still smiling ... Jan


Re: TIMELESS LOVE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 04:18:56 PM AEST
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With every write,I see more and more the depths of your talent.So much inside you yet to surface.
I will be reading your writing for years to come my dear friend.Excellent is an understatement,awesome is used too often.I can only say that you are way beyond anything I could have already ever said about you..Enormous talent!!
Sharon


Re: TIMELESS LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:10:54 PM AEST
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The title is misleading, a very good complot for a murder. But in reality this is a love poem. the ending shows this quite clearly with the likening to an eclipse. Excellent write ,wonderful wording.

poetic hugs from

bernard.




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