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Array ( [sid] => 26806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Live or die? [time] => 2003-11-10 02:09:02 [hometext] => I wrote this poem when I was in class, I couldn't stop thinking about killing myself. [bodytext] => The pills spill out,
The thought crosses my mind,
Maybe I should die,
As I’m walking blind.

Time is running out,
The hurts getting worse,
Death seems nearer,
It’s like a curse.

Dark clouds form,
Thunder sound,
Rain starts forming,
As it hits the ground.

I feel so weak,
And completely helpless,
Why can’t the pain stop,
And end this duress.

Life draws to an end,
As I finish the last pill,
I go unconscious,
And lay very still.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cammy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Live or die?

Contributed by cammy on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 02:09:02 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



The pills spill out,
The thought crosses my mind,
Maybe I should die,
As I’m walking blind.

Time is running out,
The hurts getting worse,
Death seems nearer,
It’s like a curse.

Dark clouds form,
Thunder sound,
Rain starts forming,
As it hits the ground.

I feel so weak,
And completely helpless,
Why can’t the pain stop,
And end this duress.

Life draws to an end,
As I finish the last pill,
I go unconscious,
And lay very still.




Copyright © cammy ... [ 2003-11-10 02:09:02]
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Re: Live or die? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 02:13:26 AM AEST
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Woo now,
We can't have u killing yourself as we need u 2 keep writing!
Promise me u want do that, k?
U can hang in there as u r a strong person that we need on this planet!
Do u hear me?
peace, joy, luv,
emy
It seems there are many that wonna die and it breaks my heart 2 see it!


Re: Live or die? (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:20:13 AM AEST
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Never a nice thought, just hope you don't carry through with it at all, I know I have been there many times but I am still here...so take care okay. All the best. Oh yeah and a good write too :).

Emma.




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