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Array ( [sid] => 26795 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 'Bout nothing at all [time] => 2003-11-09 21:58:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pain sets in I'm driven to the ground.
Funny that you smile when you see me around.
Now what do you think as I get back up?
I'm laughing at you while you hide inside.
Shame though you're such a waste.
You burried your whole life with haste.
Broken and torn princess that dances.
The dance though isn't nice but it's all in the knives.
Blades so sharp that cut you so deep.
Asked you so many times not to play them.
Had to have it your way just your face.
Wish that you would stop invading my place.
Won't let me near as I aks why are you here.
Not sure of your answer as it all grinds to an end.
So I'm here alone again you've taken your leave.
Taking a bow I continue on through the desert.

The book of the faulty phoenix [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

'Bout nothing at all

Contributed by Cobalt on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 09:58:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Pain sets in I'm driven to the ground.
Funny that you smile when you see me around.
Now what do you think as I get back up?
I'm laughing at you while you hide inside.
Shame though you're such a waste.
You burried your whole life with haste.
Broken and torn princess that dances.
The dance though isn't nice but it's all in the knives.
Blades so sharp that cut you so deep.
Asked you so many times not to play them.
Had to have it your way just your face.
Wish that you would stop invading my place.
Won't let me near as I aks why are you here.
Not sure of your answer as it all grinds to an end.
So I'm here alone again you've taken your leave.
Taking a bow I continue on through the desert.

The book of the faulty phoenix

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-11-09 21:58:30]
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Re: 'Bout nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 01:42:19 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and also interesting..shows your talent..I don't know whether there is any faulty phoenix..but you seem to be rising afresh. therefore wish you the best..venkat

Re: 'Bout nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:47:09 AM AEST
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Very interesting... after I read it I just had to go back and read it again a little slower... which I think shows its depth. (Plus it's also late and I'm tired.) I just love the way you word things. Makes for a thoroughly enjoyable read.

~ Moonlit

Re: 'Bout nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 06:48:40 PM AEST
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Cobalt,

I am deeply sorry that I have posted a poem of nearly the same name as this. As mine is meant to be a humerous poem I am even more so. (at the time of posting I did not even know about this poem, and I have only just stumbled across it)

Just to let you know that there is nothing intentionaly meant by the title likeness, nor was my poem directed in any way towards your work.

Humbley,
Twinkletoes!

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