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Array ( [sid] => 26792 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowned Friendship [time] => 2003-11-09 19:58:16 [hometext] => Another on lost friendship................ [bodytext] => I don’t understand, refuse to pretend,
I don’t know and never will
why emotions I lend
and decision my own, true friendships kill
why tears already fallen drowned those that were close,
not by me but those who don’t care
and even though I dry them they hurt more than most
catching those who ran and are no longer here.
A brother in my eyes until I let him down,
he never did look back
in my own tears he left me to drowned
when I turned to reach he was already In the past [comments] => 4 [counter] => 611 [topic] => 43 [informant] => irshprnss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Drowned Friendship

Contributed by irshprnss on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:58:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don’t understand, refuse to pretend,
I don’t know and never will
why emotions I lend
and decision my own, true friendships kill
why tears already fallen drowned those that were close,
not by me but those who don’t care
and even though I dry them they hurt more than most
catching those who ran and are no longer here.
A brother in my eyes until I let him down,
he never did look back
in my own tears he left me to drowned
when I turned to reach he was already In the past

Copyright Â© irshprnss ... [ 2003-11-09 19:58:16]
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Re: Drowned Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 08:01:56 PM AEST
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I liked this my friend..left to drown in your own tears..tragic . very well done! Larry

Re: Drowned Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 10:53:16 PM AEST
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Very good write indeed,
but don't pick up where they left off.
You know how to relate don't blame it on you.
Very sicko people you will view!

Beautiful poem, you have so much talent!
Be Brave, Be Strong, Be gallant!
Wonderful poem, I liked it alot!
lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Drowned Friendship (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 04:38:31 AM AEST
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Welldone...venkat

Re: Drowned Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:50:42 PM AEST
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when i turned to reach he was already in the past , what a great line. i loved this poem, your friend doug

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