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The song of the rain

Contributed by soccerfkh on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:02:22 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



The song of the rain brings
back memories- for shame!
The time has been lost,
out the window was tossed,
working hard all the same,
wondering whether- had it came?
Was I there?
Was it really to spare?
Idle- the pains,
though the heart shows no feigns,
of fright in the song,
I wish it were wrong.
Evasive in shame(I),
Ubiquitous it came,
Echoed it's name,
The Song of the Rain.




Copyright © soccerfkh ... [ 2003-11-08 16:02:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The song of the rain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:26:46 PM AEST
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intersting write I liked this
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Re: The song of the rain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 10:56:52 PM AEST
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The poem is ok, I gave it a 3, but the note at the top, well I dunno, why rubbish this site?
I dont know much about this php nuke thing you talk about, but I looked at the site you said, and it has this php stuff too, and tho looks different, has same sort of setup, well looks to me like, maybe it php mini nuke or php bombed out or sumthing, cause it dont even take up the full screen.
I wont go there again, cause I like this site, I come here to read all the time, and to have it rubbished by another, well the other just must be jealous or sumthing. If you dont like it dont come here, simple as that. If it wasnt for your rubbishing of this site, I think I would have liked the other one too, but this just put me off it.

Manu


Re: The song of the rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:13:22 PM AEST
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I did like the write but I must agree that message did kinda put me off and it will put many off who would consider this a home. Home or a place of refuge or whatever it is to each individual. I like this place. Glad I found it.


Re: The song of the rain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:56:42 PM AEST
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I started to write you a comment on your poem (which, by the way, contains poor grammar) but I don't think you are worth it. I won't waste more time on a site-basher, not when you are bashing the BEST poetry site on the net..


Re: The song of the rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 02:32:25 AM AEST
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Atfer reading your author's note, I don't even care to read your poem. If ths site sucks as much as you say..why visit?? Or even post here?? Go back and stay on elite.com




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