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Loving Hate
Contributed by
Ash
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:41:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Violent tenderness, tears run down my face.
Lovingly beating, scars can't be erased.
Gently screaming, singing your soul to sleep.
A broken token of my angry exaltation to keep.
Fury of my adoration, through your veins will crawl.
I will give you everything, come on take it all.
Copyright ©
Ash
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2003-11-08 14:41:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Loving Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:10:25 PM AEST (User
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I liked this poem its very good for a short one
keep up the good work
peace
JENNA |
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Re: Loving Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by michelled43 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 01:02:02 AM AEST (User
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good writing i enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Loving Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 07:29:16 AM AEST (User
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god, this is wonderful...i love it...it reminds me of romeo and juliet. so stunning. every line here just takes my breath away... xxx |
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