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my life is out of control
Contributed by
sheigha
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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this is all crazy
everythings hazy
u tell me im sleezy
u think this is easy?
leave me alone
i don't need that tone
im so effing tired
but yet im so wired
this thing we call living
i try to be giving
its all just so tough
to u i look rough
everything's spinning
im never winning
i need it to end
please help me mend
its all getting faster
i can't be the master
quiet
Copyright ©
sheigha
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2003-11-08 14:24:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: my life is out of control
(User Rating: 1 ) by loopylou on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:31:42 PM AEST (User
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i like it i like it alot. the way in which youve set out the poem emphasises your feeling of losing controll |
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Re: my life is out of control
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrghtNSnshny on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 07:59:11 PM AEST (User
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very good...shows great feeling |
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Re: my life is out of control
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 04:18:14 AM AEST (User
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Great write...although probably not a great feeling to go through to write about. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: my life is out of control
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 07:44:08 AM AEST (User
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Exceptionally good write
Welcome to the club!
Bob |
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