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the moon lied to me
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:50:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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after a nights of wondering this threatning earth
i looked to the skies for guidence
i tried to berry my dissapointment inside
as i relized their was none but one star in the sky
and a full moon
i had never seen a moon as big as this and was intreguied
it sparked up a curiosity in me
and gave me a false lack of hope
knowing i had nothing i decided to walk towards the moon in search of a personal peace
i looked one last time at single star in the sky
and when i looked back the moon had hid from me
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2003-11-08 13:50:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the moon lied to me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ash on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:03:42 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful poem, and I can relate to it. I spent last night staring at a huge full moon, wondering how it could look so beautiful that it hurt, when I was already so sad. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Re: the moon lied to me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emotions101 on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:03:54 PM AEST (User
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Great poem, Well written! |
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