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I'd Love You To Suffer
Contributed by
Ash
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Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 12:56:51 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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'Take care of yourself' and 'You're beautiful to me.'
You're deluded and moronic if you think I can't see,
A bunch of ***** lines said to give me a thrill
I'll take care of myself, 'cause no one else will.
***** you. I don't need you.
Want you.
Love you.
***** you. I'd love you to suffer.
I don't want to hear your pretty words.
I don't want a picture of us that works.
All I want is for you to DIE!
Hear that little voice inside?
SUFFER, *****! SUFFER!
Life is suffering, Here!
Let me help you to live!
You're the one I'll never forgive.
***** you! I don't need you!
Want you!
Or love you!
I'd love you to suffer!
Copyright ©
Ash
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2003-11-08 12:56:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'd Love You To Suffer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 10:58:14 PM AEST (User
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This was very filled with anger... I will suggest outside of my norm but maybe you should try forgiving I'm not saying forget or you would have learned nothing. I liked it minus the *****. |
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Re: I'd Love You To Suffer
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:33:52 PM AEST (User
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good poem I agree u need to forgive I hope that this got most of yer anger out.
Bobo (Joel) |
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