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Array ( [sid] => 26674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My heart won't let me try anymore [time] => 2003-11-07 21:18:21 [hometext] => More so dedicated towards a friend... but honeslty boy... I'm walking away now. [bodytext] => You are the most amazingly perfect
man in the world,
but I'm not an idiot...
I know how the world works
and I know that I can't love you.
Too many spaces have come between us...
and as much sense as it would make,
to just be with you up until the time we are gone.
I know that we can't jump for each other.
And your love will always be the first,
but I will find a way to move on-
even though I may never let completly go.
And when I love you...
I must leave you.
You took my hand when I needed you most,
but I can't let myself fall any further.
So I am just going to walk away and not look back...
because then I risk the chance of falling all over again.
But I'm not an idiot,
I know how the world works
and I know that I can't love you anymore.
Too many spaces have come between us
and my heart...
just won't let me try anymore. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 52 [informant] => stargazer [notes] => (Edited for spelling) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
My heart won't let me try anymore

Contributed by stargazer on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 09:18:21 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



You are the most amazingly perfect
man in the world,
but I'm not an idiot...
I know how the world works
and I know that I can't love you.
Too many spaces have come between us...
and as much sense as it would make,
to just be with you up until the time we are gone.
I know that we can't jump for each other.
And your love will always be the first,
but I will find a way to move on-
even though I may never let completly go.
And when I love you...
I must leave you.
You took my hand when I needed you most,
but I can't let myself fall any further.
So I am just going to walk away and not look back...
because then I risk the chance of falling all over again.
But I'm not an idiot,
I know how the world works
and I know that I can't love you anymore.
Too many spaces have come between us
and my heart...
just won't let me try anymore.




Copyright © stargazer ... [ 2003-11-07 21:18:21]
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Re: My heart won't let me try anymore (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 10:41:07 PM AEST
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This, my dear, is heartbreakingly beautiful. Exceptional write.

Larry ( rakerman)


Re: My heart won't let me try anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 12:15:31 AM AEST
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wow i really enjoyed this poem it reminds me of somewhat how i write i really like your style great job please post more

Peace

jenna


Re: My heart won't let me try anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:15:01 AM AEST
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This was beautifuly written and conveys the emotions perfectly. I wish you two could find a way if you love each other but alas sometimes...




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