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(but I don't see it)

I am a pretty girl
I hear the elders say

I am a pretty girl
I have no powder or make up on

I am a pretty girl they say
(but I don't see it )

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Pretty girl

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:52:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I am a pretty girl
(but I don't see it)

I am a pretty girl
I hear the elders say

I am a pretty girl
I have no powder or make up on

I am a pretty girl they say
(but I don't see it )

JENNA

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Re: Pretty girl (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 05:28:26 PM AEST
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That is exactly what happens to me,
How did you know??

Re: Pretty girl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:21:17 PM AEST
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by Jellybellyprincess on Friday, November 07 2003 @ 14:57:49 CST
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Natural beauty doesn't need make up..... sometimes people can't see how beautiful they truly are. I have a strong belief that everyone is beautiful in their own unique way--- we're all reflections of God......

Neat idea

take care,
Jellybellyprincess

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Re: Pretty girl (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:25:19 PM AEST
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Beauty isn't on the outside only, it is about the whole package! I liked this, it showed how many of us feel
Diana

Re: Pretty girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:22:11 AM AEST
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YOU'RE A PRETTY GIRL IF THATS YOU IN THE PICTURE. TELL ME HOW I CAN PUT A PICTURE OF ME UP

Re: Pretty girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:36:23 AM AEST
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Purgatori

You must have written this as a teenager---Many teen girls question their beauty and seem only to notice their faults.
I must tell you---You are not a prettry girl---"There"Do you feel better ?
Jenne--You are a beautiful Woman. I liked this short poem it says a lot.

Sinned

Re: Pretty girl (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 08:25:19 AM AEST
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This is lovely in such an innocent way. Beauty is said to be in the eye of the beholder and sometime's it can blind one to what realy is there. Not to worry in your case this elder appreciates something you have that i even i envy, the corauge of conviction, you write what you feel and don't worry about what others might think. Now that's beauty bothe inside and out. Another treasure that never falters.

Ben

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