Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:04:26 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 26631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Devil's love! [time] => 2003-11-07 06:38:44 [hometext] => * * * [bodytext] => Devils wear beautiful masks of love
Spirits dance around them with love
To show that hell is a place of love
They invite souls with smiles of love
When souls jump into hell with love
With false hopes to find joys of love
They throw the souls into fires of love
Then celebrate their victory with love
Thus poor souls never find that love

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kalika_vidya [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Devil's love!

Contributed by kalika_vidya on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:38:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Devils wear beautiful masks of love
Spirits dance around them with love
To show that hell is a place of love
They invite souls with smiles of love
When souls jump into hell with love
With false hopes to find joys of love
They throw the souls into fires of love
Then celebrate their victory with love
Thus poor souls never find that love

Copyright © kalika_vidya ... [ 2003-11-07 06:38:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 1 )
by M2003UK on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 11:14:24 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

interesting..liked it..

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 08:46:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

interesting write........they invite souls........ i like that part..........

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 01:19:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

interesting write

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 03:43:37 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

yeah.... very interesting indeed... i agree with you on this.. to some extent anyways.

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:00:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Powerful use of repetition...I concur with everyone else except garyh.

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 03:09:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I agree with you up to a point but somewhere along the line we stop being slaves of our hormones and aquire discernment.

The devils masks don't fool us any more!

I would love to see a second verse??????

bob

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 1 )
by chandramohan on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 07:11:04 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Love is life....
Devils wont find love..
well written..
Chandramohan

Re: Devil's love! (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:51:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh, this one hit home! You are a very insightful poet. Concise, complete, and just plain well written. Nice stuff.
Stitch

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com