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Array ( [sid] => 26623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you are still here and i miss you [time] => 2003-11-07 01:14:44 [hometext] => seems like two different poems in one, but it's just one train of thought, wandering a bit at first, then coming together in the end. lost love, even before the love is lost. [bodytext] => i remain
only to maintain
the futile battle
fought with the pain
the endless struggle
fought in vain

i hate
cuz it's trendy
cuz it makes me seem "cool"
i hate
cuz i've got nothing better to do

i twitch
cuz something's wrong with me
i'm not sure what
not sure it matters anymore

i live
because it's all i know
it's all i've ever done
i'd try something new
but, it seems kinda pointless

i loved you
you were everything i dreamed of
every sappy cliche i knew
formed into a black winged angel
whose eyes saw only me

i don't know if i love you anymore
nothing is the same
two different people now
where once, we were one
different paths, different plans
different life

you're still here and i miss you

i die tonight
i refuse to let you go
so i'm letting myself go instead
i won't drag you through
a messy divorce
just leave you the mess
that i'll make of my head
wipe my brain off the wall
and bury my body
then find someone
new and improved

i think i still love you
guess i'll never know
cuz, i won't live long enough
to lose you

(you are still here
and i miss you) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
you are still here and i miss you

Contributed by Cancer on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:14:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



i remain
only to maintain
the futile battle
fought with the pain
the endless struggle
fought in vain

i hate
cuz it's trendy
cuz it makes me seem "cool"
i hate
cuz i've got nothing better to do

i twitch
cuz something's wrong with me
i'm not sure what
not sure it matters anymore

i live
because it's all i know
it's all i've ever done
i'd try something new
but, it seems kinda pointless

i loved you
you were everything i dreamed of
every sappy cliche i knew
formed into a black winged angel
whose eyes saw only me

i don't know if i love you anymore
nothing is the same
two different people now
where once, we were one
different paths, different plans
different life

you're still here and i miss you

i die tonight
i refuse to let you go
so i'm letting myself go instead
i won't drag you through
a messy divorce
just leave you the mess
that i'll make of my head
wipe my brain off the wall
and bury my body
then find someone
new and improved

i think i still love you
guess i'll never know
cuz, i won't live long enough
to lose you

(you are still here
and i miss you)




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-11-07 01:14:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: you are still here and i miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 05:57:33 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking!
It strectches the brain!
good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: you are still here and i miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 08:43:45 PM AEST
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oh wow........so i'm letting myself go instead........yes!!!!!!


Re: you are still here and i miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:15:10 AM AEST
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my foggy brain can only think of one word "wow"

Bobo (Joel)




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