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Array ( [sid] => 26620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lies [time] => 2003-11-07 00:31:09 [hometext] => This is my way of venting because "frendz" dont seem to understand that I really like this guy, but that stil dont make me a **** [bodytext] => call him a jerk-off
call me a ***
ur wordz dont mean nuthing
to a gurl that is burning

burning with love
burning with hate
burning and burning...
u just cant relate

these feelings r tru
these feeling r real
but people dont get
that thats the way i feel

y must they lie
gossip, and scorn
itz not like im easy
like i starred in some porn

people r cruel
people r rong
but at least ive got sum1
who'll love my lifelong
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Alyssa [notes] => (Edited by Mod_8 for language) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Lies

Contributed by Alyssa on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:31:09 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

call him a jerk-off
call me a ***
ur wordz dont mean nuthing
to a gurl that is burning

burning with love
burning with hate
burning and burning...
u just cant relate

these feelings r tru
these feeling r real
but people dont get
that thats the way i feel

y must they lie
gossip, and scorn
itz not like im easy
like i starred in some porn

people r cruel
people r rong
but at least ive got sum1
who'll love my lifelong

Copyright © Alyssa ... [ 2003-11-07 00:31:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Undeadsuperstar on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:38:03 AM AEST
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impressive.... this flows so well, you obviously know what you're doing with a pen. None of this is forced, it all comes together so well to such a meaningful point. If your friends are not cool to you for what you feel, then they obviously aren't really your friends.

JZR

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:58:27 AM AEST
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you put your feelings well into this i enjoyed reading it... you don't need friends that are that way

peace and joy

JENNI

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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My grandaughter's name is Alyssa..i wonder if it's you..her spelling is kind of funky ..and she'd need the mod too..lol..and she's a good poet.. like me...lol and you...

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